**_P@ther Ker Diya_**

[ahsaas]

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[Capt.Abdur Rehman]

Re: **_P@ther Ker Diya_**

"her lamha tujay sochtay rehna mehwor ban gia zindagi ka..
tum nay aik pal main in sochoon ko muntashir ker diya..!"

wah g wah aap nay to dill ko hilla ..bulkay kissi ki yaad main rulla dya hai..!
very nice poetry+very cool designing..

[Mujahid Khan]

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wah wah kia kehnay aap k

terey pass waqt na thah tho daastan ko apni
hum nay aik hichki may keh kar mukhtasar kar dia

her lamha tujeh sochtey rehna mehwar bun gaya zindagi ka
tum nay aik pal mau unn sochon ko muntashir kar dia

bohot khoob bohot he achchey khayalaat hainthmbup:

[Z.]

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wow Ahsaas aap to kamal ki poetess hein :D

likhti rahein

[ahsaas]

Re: **_P@ther Ker Diya_**

"her lamha tujay sochtay rehna mehwor ban gia zindagi ka..
tum nay aik pal main in sochoon ko muntashir ker diya..!"

wah g wah aap nay to dill ko hilla ..bulkay kissi ki yaad main rulla dya hai..!
very nice poetry+very cool designing..

buhat Shukriya Apka ..Ye tou Ap ka hussn-e-Zouq hai jo Apko itna feel huaa:):rose

[ahsaas]

Re: **_P@ther Ker Diya_**

wah wah kia kehnay aap k

terey pass waqt na thah tho daastan ko apni
hum nay aik hichki may keh kar mukhtasar kar dia

her lamha tujeh sochtey rehna mehwar bun gaya zindagi ka
tum nay aik pal mau unn sochon ko muntashir kar dia

bohot khoob bohot he achchey khayalaat hainthmbup:

Thanks A Lot 4 such nice Appriciation and feedback)

[ahsaas]

Re: **_P@ther Ker Diya_**

wow Ahsaas aap to kamal ki poetess hein :D

likhti rahein

Sis kamaal k tou abhi nahin huye..bas Koshish ki hai apna best deny ki:)
Apki Hosla Afzai ka buhat shukriya:rose.ji Zaror likhty rahein gey:thmbup:

[Hum@]

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shoroaat kemal ki ke ha ahsaas bohat acha likha ha khs kr pahla shear mujhe bohat acha lega

[*Rida*]

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Assalaam-0-Alaikom

agreed to bloo....buht acha likha hai Ahsaas.....:em:
keep it up dear :phool:

[ahsaas]

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Assalaam-0-Alaikom

agreed to bloo....buht acha likha hai Ahsaas.....:em:
keep it up dear :phool:

Wa Alikum Asslam:)

ahaan :blush:Thank U so much 4 Appriciation Rida Dear:phool:

[Rameez]

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waqaaii kaamalll likhhaa haa jaanabb....maa too doob giiaaaa

[J.KHAN]

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wah ji nice poetry.

Ahsaas ji ab aa jaoo plzzzzzzzzzz

[WASI ANJUM]

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Tere ahsaas se he to dharkta raha ye dil her dam
mom jaisay is dil ko aaj hum ne be zaban pathar kar diya

bahoot he aala poetry..........lajwab

[*Hijab*]

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lajwab

[Ali jee]

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bohat hi khubsurat nazm he