chaand

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Assalamalikum

written by me :D

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: chaand

Duur Itna K Chhu Bhi na Sakein Hum
Phir Bhi Chhonay Ka Ehsas De Jata Ye Chaand

Bohat umdah Aanchal ji:thmbup::phool: ..Aap k kalam ko pwrh k chaand se wabasta yaadein taza ho gaeen :)

[Masood]

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Arey waah Azra aap to number ley gaee hain - eeman sey. Bohat umdah aur achhi tarha sey aap ney likha hai keh dil khush ho geya. Apni is shairana soch ko mazeed taqweeyat pohanchahiye aur likhti rahi :) Very well done ...

[RulzZ]

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tilisam-e-shab kay fasooN ko baRhata yeh Chand.. Nice
bohot achi kavish hai :rose

[.]

Re: chaand

sab ka buhat shukria

['SamRazi']

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Woww.......... Aanchal ........ shairi compose kertey kertey U bhi shaira ban gayi ........ :p

buhut acha likha hai ........ :) :thmbup:

[shakeeel]

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bohat khoobsurat likha hai.......its really beautiful

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: chaand

Asslam_O_Alikum WR WB

Mashalah ! bhot umda

FeaamnAllah

[fari]

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chand
Dasht ka tanha musafir ko bhi na choray tanha
nice one.................

[Aatif Saeed]

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Bohat achay janab

[gazal_uzma]

Re: chaand

wow
bohot hi khobsorat
bohot pasand aaie
regards
uzma khan

[Z.]

Re: chaand

:thmbup: :rose

door itna key choo bhi na sakein hum
phir bhi chooney ka ehsaas dey jata ye chaand