: Noor ki wadi :

[pErIsH_BoY]

: Noor ki wadi :

Poonam ke chand kitna roshan hai tu aaj

Kitni nikhri nikhri si hai aaj chandni teri ..

Zameen e dil pe phaili jheel si ankhon main

jhilmil karta chehra tera ..

Aks dikhata hai tere joban ka ..

Noor hi noor phail geya her soo ..

Ranginiyun main doob geyi sari kaainat ..

Rang o Noor bhari uss wadi main

tera hi aks dilhata raha aaina mujhko ...

tera hi lams chura kar mang bhar li sitaron se ..

kehkashan si utar aayi meri rahon main ..

Subh ki Shokh kirnon ne thama anchal mera ....

Sharma ke daikha jo palat kar main ne ...

Mutthiyon main mere gulab thy mohabbaton ke

aur khushboo se mehek rehi thi meri tanhayi....


Written BY..NUzhat khan
in pg her nick is @Meh-vish

[pErIsH_BoY]

Re: : Noor ki wadi :

@Zeest @BANJARAH @thefire1
@pink rose

[Zeest]

Re: : Noor ki wadi :

nice poetry buhat hi khoobsurat words :thmbup:

[Zeest]

Re: : Noor ki wadi :

[MENTION=3014]Meh-vish[/MENTION] ap ki poerti boat achi hy.. Koshish krty rahen mazid behtri aye gi :)

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Re: : Noor ki wadi :

beautiful poetry :rose

[Meh-vish]

Re: : Noor ki wadi :

zeest...

hoslaa afzayi kabahut shukriya...

[Meh-vish]

Re: : Noor ki wadi :

Anchal...

pehli baar koshish ki hai passandeedgi ka bahut shukriya ....

[SheeN]

Re: : Noor ki wadi :

beautifull

[thefire1]

Re: : Noor ki wadi :

Bohat khoob.... waqayiii aisa lagta hay kay aap nay humain noor ki waadi ki sair karwaa dii... kitna khobusrat mahool create kia hay aap nay, full marks to your creativity and imagination.

Likhtii rahyeh, aur hum sab say share kartii rahyeh.

[Meh-vish]

Re: : Noor ki wadi :

sheen bahut shukriya....

[Meh-vish]

Re: : Noor ki wadi :

thefire1........bahut shukriya itny khubsoorat comments ke liye....ji jab soch aur khayalat haqeeqat main dhalty hain phir hi aissi shairi

takhleeq hoti hai.....pehli koshish thee aap ko pasand aayi ...bahut shukriya..