meri pehli muhubat

[Desipower]

meri pehli muhubat
meri aakhri khaahish

jaisey chand ko chamaktey daikhna
aur ussey pakrnay ko haath uthana
utha kay giraa daiana

jaisey jugnoo ki roshni ko
apni muthi mayen band ker kay
rakhna aur chor daina

jaisey roshni ki pehli kiran pay
chupkay say haath rakhna
aur phir sayey ka peecha kertey rehna

jaisey kuch soch ker muskurana yunhi
aur uss maazi ko yaad kertey huay
kabhi chupp ker ro dayna

meri pehli muhubat
meri aakhri khaahish
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[WOH LARKI]

Re: meri pehli muhubat

meri pehli muhubat
meri aakhri khaahish

jaisey chand ko chamaktey daikhna
aur ussey pakrnay ko haath uthana
utha kay giraa daiana

jaisey jugnoo ki roshni ko
apni muthi mayen band ker kay
rakhna aur chor daina

jaisey roshni ki pehli kiran pay
chupkay say haath rakhna
aur phir sayey ka peecha kertey rehna

jaisey kuch soch ker muskurana yunhi
aur uss maazi ko yaad kertey huay
kabhi chupp ker ro dayna

meri pehli muhubat
meri aakhri khaahish
_________________

Jaisay Jugnu ki roshni ko....Apni muthi mein band kar k...........rakhna aur chorr daina.....meri pehli muhabbat , meri aakhri khayesh...

boht hi umdah nazm ikhi hey aap ne DP:clap: . thanx for sharing:rose .

[handsome]

Re: meri pehli muhubat

Bohat umdah per app sya ik sawal tha wo ya kay app nay likha phayli mohabat to agay kiya or bhi kernay kay iraday ain ;lol

anay way bohat accha likha app nay :rose

[Safiya]

Re: meri pehli muhubat

Waah janaab

Aap jo bhi haiN, bohot zabardast, bohot hi khoobsoorat aur pur-asar nazm kahee haiy aapne, paRkar lutf aa gayaa. humaari taraf se bhi muibaarakbaad kubool kareN.

[aroosa]

Re: meri pehli muhubat

bohat zabardast :)

[SherY]

Re: meri pehli muhubat

bohat khoob :)

[Desipower]

Re: meri pehli muhubat

salam dosto
sab say pehlay to very sorry kay mayen aik do posts ker kay dobara yahan sau ghaib he ho gya, khayer now m here
after one year
plz welcome me lolz

acha ne ways ab mayen sab ka shukrya ada kerta hoon jinhON nay meri kawish ko pasnad kya

Jaisay Jugnu ki roshni ko....Apni muthi mein band kar k...........rakhna aur chorr daina.....meri pehli muhabbat , meri aakhri khayesh...

boht hi umdah nazm ikhi hey aap ne DP . thanx for sharing .

thnx gi kay aap nay parha aur pasand kya meri nazm ko

Bohat umdah per app sya ik sawal tha wo ya kay app nay likha phayli mohabat to agay kiya or bhi kernay kay iraday ain ;lol

anay way bohat accha likha app nay

gi aap kay ik sawal ka ik jawab yeh hay kay insan zindagi mayen muhubat siraf aik baar he kerta hay, baqi sirf hawas hoti hay. (personal opinion, u can disagree)

Waah janaab

Aap jo bhi haiN, bohot zabardast, bohot hi khoobsoorat aur pur-asar nazm kahee haiy aapne, paRkar lutf aa gayaa. humaari taraf se bhi muibaarakbaad kubool kareN.

like ur post
ji ham jo bhi hayen, buhut zabardast hayen :). kidding,
aap ki mubarakbaad qaboolee ham nay :)

bohat zabardast

shukrya, nawazish

bohat khoob

pasandeedgi ka shukrya :)

[Yaaram]

Re: meri pehli muhubat

Bohat pyari nazm likhi hay aap ne Desipower lekan thori late nazar pari :) keep sharing :)

[Desipower]

Re: meri pehli muhubat

gi late nazar pari
thnx for apic. yaram :)

[ummid]

Re: meri pehli muhubat

meri pehli muhubat
meri aakhri khaahish

jaisey kuch soch ker muskurana yunhi
aur uss maazi ko yaad kertey huay
kabhi chupp ker ro dayna

meri pehli muhubat
meri aakhri khaahish
_________________

bauaht hi acchi nazam hai:rose ....khaas ker jo paira hum ne quote kiya hai woh hume bauhat pasand aaya....:)
nice sharin...:thmbup:

[Desipower]

Re: meri pehli muhubat

pasandeedgi ka shukrya ummid.....
:)

[zeeshan]

Re: meri pehli muhubat

mere pehle muhabat......bht khob

[Desipower]

Re: meri pehli muhubat

pasandeedgi ka shukrya zeeshan