Jao tumhein moaf kiya

['SamRazi']

Re: Jao tumhein moaf kiya

HMMMMMMMMMM.... ZABARDAST..................

HMMMM......... shukriya :p ,

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Jao tumhein moaf kiya

tum humesha oulta hi samajhtey ho :tauba

zaheri baat hay seehda banda ulta hee samjy ga

[zeeshan]

Re: Jao tumhein moaf kiya

bht khoob saima :)

['SamRazi']

Re: Jao tumhein moaf kiya

bht khoob saima :)

Thnx Zeeshan :)

[Mujahid Khan]

aik pegham

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['SamRazi']

Re: mashwara

assalamualekum saaima mey ney aap ki nazm
'aankhon mey aansoo chupathi rahoon'
iss nazm key jawab mey main ne aik nazm likhi hai mind nahi kariyiega,arz hai

aankhon mey aansoo chupathi raho
kuch na kaho muskurathi raho

gar mey bathaoon bura maan jao
ke rona nahi ab rulathi raho

ghazlen tum ghamgin likhna nahi
baharon key geet gungunati raho

yadon ko sochon mey lana nahi
aur dujon ki sochon mey aati raho

apni qeemat gawa ke roti ho tum
ab sey qeemat tum apni bardhti raho

tum ne dekhey hai chand
aur taron ki mehfil
chamktey huwey piarey
piaron ki mehfil
wo ik do nahi hain
hazaron ki mehfil
kabhi wo nahi koi
faryad kartey hain
bus hum hi unhain
yaad kartey hain
wo raaton ko jagen
din ko wo sotey hain
hotey hain ye
chand,taron ki mehfil
chamaktey huwey piarey
piaron ki mehfil
tu chand aur taron ki mehfil mey aa
chand ki chandni mey itrathi raho

aankhon mey aansoo chupati raho
kuch na kaho muskurati raho

*****************mujahid khan*************

I'm speechless ........ :)

This is so sweet aur yaqin kijiyeh buhut acha likha hai aap ne .......... buhut buhut shukriya

Magar yeh shair jo aap ne likha.......

yadon ko sochon mey lana nahi
aur dujon ki sochon mey aati raho


dosron ki soch mei aana mumkin hai magar yadon ko khudh se nikal dena mimkin nahi ........

['SamRazi']

Re: mashwara

assalamualekum saaima mey ney aap ki nazm
'aankhon mey aansoo chupathi rahoon'
iss nazm key jawab mey main ne aik nazm likhi hai mind nahi kariyiega,arz hai

Mei ne bilkul mind nahi kiya, aur jahan tak baat is nazm ka hai yeh merilikhi huwi nahi balkey ek ganey ke chand bol hain jo mujhe pasand aayeh to meine compose ker liyeh :)

[Baad-e-Saba]

Re: Jao tumhein moaf kiya

nice

[Mujahid Khan]

Re: Jao tumhein moaf kiya

kesey kehh detey ho keh jao tumhey maaf kia
halankey ishq ke kuch qaidey aur kitab hotey hain

mehboob key nakhrey aur raqeeb ki shararaten
bohoth hi ziada sakht aur purazab hotey hain
kesey kehh detey ho keh jao tumhey maaf kia
halankey ishq.............................................. .................

kesey aajatey hain mehboob raqeeb ki baathon mey
ussey maalum keh raqeeb khaana kharab hotey hain
kesey............................................. ...................................
halankey ishq.............................................. ............................

tohfey tahaif aksar udhaar bhi kharidney hotey hain
aur mehboob ye samjeh keh aashiq saarey nawab hothey hain
kesy keh............................................... .............................
halankey.......................................... .......................................

aashiq ki saari umer tho bus khayalon mey guzarthi hai
ik deed hothi hai aur mahinon phir khwab hothey hain
kesy keh detey ho................................................ ............
halankey.......................................... .................................

ishq key rozgaar mey aashiq hamesha maqruz hotha hai
uss ki tankhwa sey mehboob bohoth shaadab hothey hain
kesey keh detey ho ke jao tumhey maaf kia
halankey ishq ke kuch qaaidey aur kitaab hothey hain

['SamRazi']

Re: Jao tumhein moaf kiya

this is amazing .......... sab se achey ashar yeh lagey mujhe .......... kuch batein yaad aa gayi .... aisa laga kuch saal wapis chali gayi mei .......... aap buhut acha likhtey ho....... keep it up :thmbup:

kesey aajatey hain mehboob raqeeb ki baathon mey
ussey maalum keh raqeeb khaana kharab hotey hain

tohfey tahaif aksar udhaar bhi kharidney hotey hain
aur mehboob ye samjeh keh aashiq saarey nawab hothey hain

[Mujahid Khan]

Re: Jao tumhein moaf kiya

bohoth bohoth shukria saaima,aap ki hosla hafzaai ka,wesey aap bhi kuch kum achchah nahi likhti hain,aap hi se tho main mutaasar ho kar main ne ye nazam likhkhi hai,aap ki mazeed shaairi ko pardne ka intizaar rahega:thmbup:

['SamRazi']

Re: Jao tumhein moaf kiya

bohoth bohoth shukria saaima,aap ki hosla hafzaai ka,wesey aap bhi kuch kum achchah nahi likhti hain,aap hi se tho main mutaasar ho kar main ne ye nazam likhkhi hai,aap ki mazeed shaairi ko pardne ka intizaar rahega:thmbup:

thnx Sensable.. me koi regular shaira nahi hoon :p bas jab kabhi dil mei koi baat aayeh to likh deti hoon ..... pasand kerne ak shukriya :)

[Mujahid Khan]

duaa

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[Mehak]

Re: Jao tumhein moaf kiya






bohat hi achhi ghazal hai.... yeh shair bohat pasand aaya mujhey
thanx for sharing dear. :rose

['SamRazi']

Re: Jao tumhein moaf kiya

bohat hi achhi ghazal hai.... yeh shair bohat pasand aaya mujhey
thanx for sharing dear. :rose

thanks for appreciating :rose