Ik Tum Jo Meray Hotay

[WOH LARKI]

:phool:

[handsome]

Re: Ik Tum Jo Meray Hotay

Bohat zaberdast shairi hay :)

[aik_lerki]

Re: Ik Tum Jo Meray Hotay

wow muskaan.. :)
nice sharing :rose

[Masood]

Re: Ik Tum Jo Meray Hotay

Muskan bohat umdah, aur dil ko chhuu janey wali nazam hai, share karney ka bohat shukriyah... Likhti rahiye, i'll be waiting for more :)

[Shaim]

Re: Ik Tum Jo Meray Hotay

nicoooooo poem hai sis keep sharing alwayys!:)

[khurram_shaikh]

Re: Ik Tum Jo Meray Hotay

[QUOTE=Muskan]

[muskaan]

Re: Ik Tum Jo Meray Hotay

bauhat hi khubsurat nazam likhi hai muskan :)

[WOH LARKI]

Re: Ik Tum Jo Meray Hotay

Masood, masoom bachi, Khurram aur Muskaan aap sub ka pasand karnay ka be hadd Shukriya. :)

[hayaa_n]

Re: Ik Tum Jo Meray Hotay

Mushan ji,,,Waah bouhat khoob. bouhat pasand aai mujhay aap ki yeh khubsurat nazm.:)

[WOH LARKI]

Re: Ik Tum Jo Meray Hotay

Mushan ji,,,Waah bouhat khoob. bouhat pasand aai mujhay aap ki yeh khubsurat nazm.:)

Aap ka behadd o hisaab shukriya hayaa ji k aap ki nazer e karam iss na cheez ki nazm per parri, warna aap jaisi manjhi hui shayera k muqablay mein to hum aissay hi hein jaissay chand k samnay aik diyaa.:)

[Yaaram]

Re: Ik Tum Jo Meray Hotay

Bohat kamal ka likha hay aapne Muskan
Anso bhi wafa dari nibhane ankhoN main aa baste hain :)
Kya kamal Alfaz ka istimal kya hay wah zaradast :)

[Aania]

Re: Ik Tum Jo Meray Hotay

very nice though

[WOH LARKI]

Re: Ik Tum Jo Meray Hotay

THanx alot Aania and Yaaram.:rose :khi:

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: Ik Tum Jo Meray Hotay

Asslam_O_Alikum WR WB

Wah ! bhot umda

FeaamnAllah

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: Ik Tum Jo Meray Hotay

wowwww
bohat zabardast :phool: