Pehali Baar..

[tauseeftariq]

apni ek new nazam post ker rehaa hoon
yeh us he "series" ke nazam hai jo pehly post ke hain
"abhi tum ko bekhrana hai" and "tumhain muhbbat ho gi hai"
yeh as series ke last poem hai....... ab dekhin as ke baad kitna
"gaaaaaaaaap" ataa hai
app key comments bhut important hon gey...

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: Pehali Baar..

Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

Very Nice

FeaamnAllah

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: Pehali Baar..

Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

Very Nice

FeaamnAllah

[*Rida*]

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Assalaam-o-Aliakom:rose

buht khoob
very true

[Shaim]

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apni ek new nazam post ker rehaa hoon
yeh us he "series" ke nazam hai jo pehly post ke hain
"abhi tum ko bekhrana hai" and "tumhain muhbbat ho gi hai"
yeh as series ke last poem hai....... ab dekhin as ke baad kitna
"gaaaaaaaaap" ataa hai
app key comments bhut important hon gey...

Wow Nicoo hai ye bhi......:thmbup:
per MISS CALL is series mai included nahi thi?
ur poems ki ik acchi bat ye hai k ur poems dukhi nahi hooti balk light or khoobsorat or simple hoti hain!
CARRY ON!!!:thmbup: :thmbup:

Share ur poems wid us bhai.....i'll accept that as a gift...
dekha me kitni acchi behna hon.....i demand nothing:blush: :lpop:
By The Way Image Is Also Beautiful!:thmbup:

[tauseeftariq]

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Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

Very Nice

FeaamnAllah

thanks

[tauseeftariq]

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Assalaam-o-Aliakom:rose

buht khoob
very true

shkria jee

[tauseeftariq]

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Wow Nicoo hai ye bhi......:thmbup:
per MISS CALL is series mai included nahi thi?
ur poems ki ik acchi bat ye hai k ur poems dukhi nahi hooti balk light or khoobsorat or simple hoti hain!
CARRY ON!!!:thmbup: :thmbup:

Share ur poems wid us bhai.....i'll accept that as a gift...
dekha me kitni acchi behna hon.....i demand nothing:blush: :lpop:
By The Way Image Is Also Beautiful!:thmbup:

thanks behnaa.. 4 such nice reply...
chaloo as tuhfy sey kaam chal giya kharchaa nahin howa hahaha
warnaa behnaa tu " kherchy" ka dosraa naaam hain
yes behnaa bus sady sey log hain sada sey nazam lekh dety hain
app sub pasand kerty hain ..shukria
miss call...... 100% tu as seris main nahin " kuch kuch hai"..
samjhin jee.. thanks again

[Shaim]

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thanks behnaa.. 4 such nice reply...
chaloo as tuhfy sey kaam chal giya kharchaa nahin howa hahaha
warnaa behnaa tu " kherchy" ka dosraa naaam hain
yes behnaa bus sady sey log hain sada sey nazam lekh dety hain
app sub pasand kerty hain ..shukria
miss call...... 100% tu as seris main nahin " kuch kuch hai"..
samjhin jee.. thanks again

thx k liye np.com!
.......ye kis ne kaha ye kharche wali bat?:cc:
ji a gai samajh!:khi:

[ummid]

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exellent:thmbup:
bauhat hi zabardast poem hai.
aur image bhi accha hai.
great work:phool:
khush rahiye.

[tauseeftariq]

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thx k liye np.com!
.......ye kis ne kaha ye kharche wali bat?:cc:
ji a gai samajh!:khi:

ary behnaa .. choti behnon ke tu kharcha kerwati rehti hain
kabhi yeh chahiye kabhi woh chahiye...:lol ..... aur badi behnon
ke kaaam kernain main kherchy ho jatin hain bhiyon key.. :khi:
samjh gain..
haan per yeh baat hai key as tarah ke khrchy ker ke dil khush hotaa hai
..........

[tauseeftariq]

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exellent:thmbup:
bauhat hi zabardast poem hai.
aur image bhi accha hai.
great work:phool:
khush rahiye.

thanks............. Ummid.......... bhut bhut shkria
pasand kerna ka........ app ke tarief sey..... bhut sey UMmidin bhadh gain ..apni shari sey
thanks...... aur image waqi bhut cooolll hai......... meri fav8 hai

[Shaim]

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ary behnaa .. choti behnon ke tu kharcha kerwati rehti hain
kabhi yeh chahiye kabhi woh chahiye...:lol ..... aur badi behnon
ke kaaam kernain main kherchy ho jatin hain bhiyon key.. :khi:
samjh gain..
haan per yeh baat hai key as tarah ke khrchy ker ke dil khush hotaa hai
..........

Me to chotti behna hi hoon apne saaab bhayon ki:khi:
or me ki list kafffi lambi hai ager apko kharche acche lagte hain to bataiin apko bhejti hon apni list!:lpop: :lpop:

[tauseeftariq]

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Me to chotti behna hi hoon apne saaab bhayon ki:khi:
or me ki list kafffi lambi hai ager apko kharche acche lagte hain to bataiin apko bhejti hon apni list!:lpop: :lpop:

noooooooo.... :donno: ... abhi mery paas as tarah ke 4 lists
pehly he hain..hahah un ko neptaa loon phir app ke taraf ayen gey.........:phool:

[Shaim]

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noooooooo.... :donno: ... abhi mery paas as tarah ke 4 lists
pehly he hain..hahah un ko neptaa loon phir app ke taraf ayen gey.........:phool:

.........or ager u ne me ka no gool mool ker dia to?