Jhoot Se Dil Behla Leti Hoon....

[WOH LARKI]

:rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose

[Masood]

Re: Jhoot Se Dil Behla Leti Hoon....

Muskan!

Bohat achha laga aap ki yeh nazam parh kar keh hamarey darmiyaan aik bohat achhi shaira ka izafa ho geya hai. Main to aik arsey sey chahta tha keh aap is tarf aaein. Aaj bohat achha lag raha hai.

Siraf aik baat hai, muhabbat kabhi marti nahin :insha: hamesha zindah rahey gi :maan:

[WorThless]

Re: Jhoot Se Dil Behla Leti Hoon....

Lovely one thanks for sharing :rose Be Blessed

[handsome]

Re: Jhoot Se Dil Behla Leti Hoon....

nice :)

[muskaan]

Re: Jhoot Se Dil Behla Leti Hoon....

muskan:)

aik bauhat hi achi nazam likhi hai aap nai dil kai mamlai shayad kabhi koi nahi samajh pata kabhi kabhi sachai sai behlawa acha lagta hai :rose


khush rahiyai :)

[khurram_shaikh]

Re: Jhoot Se Dil Behla Leti Hoon....

:rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose

Assalaam o alekum,


Muskan ji bahooot khooob bahoot hi umdeh aur saadi si kavish likhi aapnien shukriyaa humse share kernien kaa Dili Daad qabool karien khush rahien

[aik_lerki]

Re: Jhoot Se Dil Behla Leti Hoon....

awesome sharing muskaan ! :rose
bohaat he zabardast hai .. :)
keep it up !!! :)

[WOH LARKI]

Re: Jhoot Se Dil Behla Leti Hoon....

O hooooooooo aik larki:hathora , mein ne itni mehnat se likha aur sara credit MUSKAAN ko de diya! Chalein koi bat nhi, woh bhi humnaam hein, muskan:) hein, iss liye no mind, kiyun MUSKAAN theek hey na?

[aik_lerki]

Re: Jhoot Se Dil Behla Leti Hoon....

O hooooooooo aik larki:hathora , mein ne itni mehnat se likha aur sara credit MUSKAAN ko de diya! Chalein koi bat nhi, woh bhi humnaam hein, muskan:) hein, iss liye no mind, kiyun MUSKAAN theek hey na?

yaar mera matalb tum he thee na .. :(
me say stupid.. mistake ho gae na
aik A zada likh dia :embarasse
sorry na

[WOH LARKI]

Re: Jhoot Se Dil Behla Leti Hoon....

yaar mera matalb tum he thee na .. :(
me say stupid.. mistake ho gae na
aik A zada likh dia :embarasse
sorry na

array janoo sorry to nhi bolo na plz:(

Bat to aik hi hey na MUSKAN likho ya MUSKAAN, matlab to wohi hey na jis ko mukhatib kiya gaya hey, so plz take your sorry back and be .

[aik_lerki]

Re: Jhoot Se Dil Behla Leti Hoon....

array janoo sorry to nhi bolo na plz:(

Bat to aik hi hey na MUSKAN likho ya MUSKAAN, matlab to wohi hey na jis ko mukhatib kiya gaya hey, so plz take your sorry back and be .

okay yaar :) :rose
gimme my sorry back ..
mai ny lay liya apna sorry vapis :wink
now u bhe happy ho jao :)

[WOH LARKI]

Re: Jhoot Se Dil Behla Leti Hoon....

okay yaar :) :rose
gimme my sorry back ..
mai ny lay liya apna sorry vapis :wink
now u bhe happy ho jao :)

:rose :maan: I m happy now:) .

[SaPpHiRe]

Re: Jhoot Se Dil Behla Leti Hoon....

it was a nice poem.........tum logoun ko shairy itni pasand kjun hai...........

i think its boring........

maybe because i dont belive in all this love,,shove shairi shuiri lolzz...

lekin it was nice to read

[WOH LARKI]

Re: Jhoot Se Dil Behla Leti Hoon....

it was a nice poem.........tum logoun ko shairy itni pasand kjun hai...........

i think its boring........

maybe because i dont belive in all this love,,shove shairi shuiri lolzz...

lekin it was nice to read

:) Nice to read your comments Sapphire.:rose :rose :rose

Answer to first question ....humein shayeri kiyun pasand hey? hnmmm Iss liye k boht see batein izhaar chahti hein, chahay woh izhar nafrat ka ho, ya love shove ka, be bassi ka ho ya ikhtyar ka...toh I think k shayeri is the best way to express your feelings.

Secondly you think k its boring.........toh har aik ka apna apna taste hota hey, chahay woh khanay peenay ki bat ho, libass ka moaamla ho, music ki bat ho, books reading ka shouq ho ya sair o tafreeh ka silsala ho to janab hum aap ko force nhi kartay k aap shayeri zaroor hi parhein :).

phir bhi you read the poem,Thanx alot. :rose :rose :rose

[SaPpHiRe]

Re: Jhoot Se Dil Behla Leti Hoon....

hey muskan.....

yeah i know that everyone got his or her own choice,,,,,,and thats maybe the reason why I dont like poetry.......cause i think its just some simple words u put together and explain alot of stuff,,,,,, i fu see it with my point of view i think i can say or explain all ur feelings by beeing honest,,,,thats enough for me,,,,,,,,thats i have the words in my mouth and know how to use them,,,i dont htink its importent to make alot of rhymes out of it and make it sound like some specfiel textt and spend ur time on this kind of crap......

but thats my opinion everyone got hi/her own.......so offcourse if u like it keep it up thats only good for u yeah.....like i love music,.and maybe someone dont.....i live with music standing up in the morning,,,,going to the toilet and making my homework,,,,,,everysecond the music is one......and music mei bhi to sheri and shairi ka istemaal hota hai.....na so offcourse mujhe sher aur shairi sunene mei koi problem nahi hai,,lekin i dont waste my time making some.......hehe lekin apni apni soch hoti hai right.......