~*Maatam k dar*~

[~Aashoo~]

aslam o alaikum ,, kuch likha hay ,,
shaid isay shairi kaha bhi nahee jata ,,
anyway koi ghalti ho to zaroor bataiay ga:)

dukh k baab jab bhi rakam kiay

zabt kay safhat bhi kholtay rahay
boond boond palkon pai roltay rahay
mizan e aankh mein aansoo toltay rahay
tootti bikharti rahi zaat pal pal
hum maatam k dar kholtay rahay
sandal sai mehaktay rahay alfaaz:rose
tere lehjay mein hum boltay rahay:rose
nadaan thay hum mosam e dhoop mein
dareecha e moam kholtay rahay
shaam e hijar sans leti rahi hum mein
hum wasl ki subah ko tatoltay rahay
hasrat ka kanch torh kar aksar wo
mere lahoo mein kirchian gholtay rahay
hum hirasaan thay zaat k sanatay sai
tanhaee mein khud sai boltay rahay
mere khuwab sotay rahay jagtay rahay
wo aankhein band kartay , kholtay rahay

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: ~*Maatam k dar*~

Ary wah G kia khobsurat likha hay

mere khuwab sotay rahay jagtay rahay
wo aankhein band kartay , kholtay rahay

nice G lakhty rahoo aur wo soty rahain

[rehman]

Re: ~*Maatam k dar*~

aslam o alaikum ,, kuch likha hay ,,
shaid isay shairi kaha bhi nahee jata ,,
anyway koi ghalti ho to zaroor bataiay ga:)

dukh k baab jab bhi rakam kiay

zabt kay safhat bhi kholtay rahay
boond boond palkon pai roltay rahay
mizan e aankh mein aansoo toltay rahay
tootti bikharti rahi zaat pal pal
hum maatam k dar kholtay rahay
sandal sai mehaktay rahay alfaaz:rose
tere lehjay mein hum boltay rahay:rose
nadaan thay hum mosam e dhoop mein
dareecha e moam kholtay rahay
shaam e hijar sans leti rahi hum mein
hum wasl ki subah ko tatoltay rahay
hasrat ka kanch torh kar aksar wo
mere lahoo mein kirchian gholtay rahay
hum hirasaan thay zaat k sanatay sai
tanhaee mein khud sai boltay rahay
mere khuwab sotay rahay jagtay rahay
wo aankhein band kartay , kholtay rahay

aap nay bahut umda likha hai..... :) bahut maza aaya.... :)

[Kainat]

Re: ~*Maatam k dar*~

hum wasl ki subah ko tatoltay rahay
hasrat ka kanch torh kar aksar wo
mere lahoo mein kirchian gholtay rahay
hum hirasaan thay zaat k sanatay sai
tanhaee mein khud sai boltay rahay
mere khuwab sotay rahay jagtay rahay
wo aankhein band kartay , kholtay rahay

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