Aik koshish hazir hidmet hai,,,,,

[Imran Aslam]

Khushi hmain daikhty hi gbrah k guzer jati hai.
Dhoop saiy say jaisy shrma k guzer jati hai.

Tairy baad hr shay stati hai tairi tarah.
Neend ankhon k samny Itra k guzer jati hai.

Duaon ka asr b kisi badua ki nazar hua.
Bulain, aiy jb mout katra k guzer jati hai.

Kha, bathian, mil kr char batain kur lay, Zindagi.
Sitmgur shokh haseena ki tarah ithla k guzer jati hai.

[Tanha Hassan]

Re: Aik koshish hazir hidmet hai,,,,,

buth he achi koshish hai aap key................welldone

[Tanha Hassan]

Re: Aik koshish hazir hidmet hai,,,,,

Reputation ka gift qabool kajey

[haya seher]

Re: Aik koshish hazir hidmet hai,,,,,

Bahoot umda....

[Imran Aslam]

Re: Aik koshish hazir hidmet hai,,,,,

Jazzak Allah,,, Shukria,,,

[*Hala*]

Re: Aik koshish hazir hidmet hai,,,,,

v.nice.. keep sharing

[thefire1]

Re: Aik koshish hazir hidmet hai,,,,,

Assalaam-O-Alaikum

Bohat hi achi koshsih hay aap kay, soch ka mayaar bohat acha hay aur lafzoon ka intikhaab bhi behtar hay, koshish jaari rakyeh aur likhtay rahyeh, khush rahyeh

Fi Amaan ALLAH

[Cute Ruba]

Re: Aik koshish hazir hidmet hai,,,,,

Nice...

[S.Athar]

Re: Aik koshish hazir hidmet hai,,,,,

:salam: Acchi Tahrer Hay :thmbup: Koshish Karin K Poetry Urdu Mian Tahrer Karin.

[Imran Aslam]

Re: Aik koshish hazir hidmet hai,,,,,

:jazak:

[Mahvish Waqas]

Re: Aik koshish hazir hidmet hai,,,,,

Assalam o Alaikum WR WB...

Bohat umdah..
khush rahain

[Nadia khan]

Re: Aik koshish hazir hidmet hai,,,,,

very nice
keep sharing