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  • *~* Suno December *~*

    Suno Decembe....!!!!

    Zara sa Tehro...
    Abhi to baqi hain mere Arma'n
    Mujhey bitaney hain chnd Lamhey
    Tumhari Thandi Panahon main Ab....

    Suno December Ki Sard Ratoon....!!!

    Zara sa Tehro...
    Guzartey Mah-o-Din ki raten
    Akeley Pan main guzar chuki hain..
    Suno in jagti si ratoon ko
    Chnd aik sapney udhar dey do....

    Suno December ki Bhegi Shamoon...!!!

    Zara sa Tehro
    Tumhari thandi thandi chaya main
    Ajub sukoo'n sa basa huwa hai
    Ye bheegey bheegey shajar hain aisey
    Hon Merey jeevan ka Aks jesey....

    Suno December Ki Ae Hawaon
    Mujhey Bikharney ka darr laga hai
    Zara sa aa k mujhey Sambhalo
    K ab k thandi hawaon main hi
    Main Apna jeevan guzaar daloon

    Suno December...!!!

    Abhi Na Guzro...

    Abhi To Baqi Hain Mere Arma'n...
    Last edited by Cute Ruba; 3 December 2009, 11:40.

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    Re: *~* Suno December *~*

    Assalaam-O-Alaikum

    Wah kia baat hay, bohat hi khoobsurat nazm aur bohat hi aala soch.... karb, guzarish, armaan, mohabbat, hijr, faraq.... itnay saaray rangoon ko aik saath simaitna bhi aik art hay jissay aap nay khoob nibhaya hay, very well done, keep writing and sharing with us, khush rahyeh
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    • #3
      Re: *~* Suno December *~*

      Assalam o Alaikum WR WB SIS...

      Bohat hi umdah aap ka andaz-e-bayan hai....
      Bohat ala likha hai aap ne....
      Aap ki janib se naya kalam ka intizar rahay ga..
      khush rahain..


      میرے الفاظ ہی پردہ ہیں میرے چہرے کا


      میں ہوں خاموش جہاں ، مجھ کو وہاں سے سنئیے

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      • #4
        Re: *~* Suno December *~*

        Walekum Asslam

        Waah zabrdast bahot khoobsurat Nazam likhi hai aap ne
        December maah ki munasibat se perh ker aur bhi achi lagi aap ki nazam
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        • #5
          Re: *~* Suno December *~*

          umda..

          ~Main tu samjha tha ke lout atey hain janey waley
          tu ney jaker tu judai meri qismat karde...~

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          • #6
            Re: *~* Suno December *~*

            Originally posted by thefire1 View Post
            Assalaam-O-Alaikum

            Wah kia baat hay, bohat hi khoobsurat nazm aur bohat hi aala soch.... karb, guzarish, armaan, mohabbat, hijr, faraq.... itnay saaray rangoon ko aik saath simaitna bhi aik art hay jissay aap nay khoob nibhaya hay, very well done, keep writing and sharing with us, khush rahyeh
            wasalam...
            thank u so much....

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            • #7
              Re: *~* Suno December *~*

              Originally posted by mehwish afsar View Post
              Assalam o Alaikum WR WB SIS...

              Bohat hi umdah aap ka andaz-e-bayan hai....
              Bohat ala likha hai aap ne....
              Aap ki janib se naya kalam ka intizar rahay ga..
              khush rahain..
              wasalam...
              thank u so much...

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              • #8
                Re: *~* Suno December *~*

                Originally posted by WASI ANJUM View Post
                Walekum Asslam

                Waah zabrdast bahot khoobsurat Nazam likhi hai aap ne
                December maah ki munasibat se perh ker aur bhi achi lagi aap ki nazam
                thanks alot...

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                • #9
                  Re: *~* Suno December *~*

                  Originally posted by naz View Post
                  umda..
                  thanks sis....

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                  • #10
                    Re: *~* Suno December *~*

                    wah wah buth he nice poetry janab....................
                    I aM Not a complete Idiot......Some parts are Missing........

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                    • #11
                      Re: *~* Suno December *~*

                      great poetry.... be happy
                      u can't gain RESPECT by choice nor by requesting it... it is earned through your words & actions."

                      :pr:

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                      • #12
                        Re: *~* Suno December *~*

                        thanks...

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