*~* Zamaney beet jain gey *~*

[Cute Ruba]

Zamaney beet jaingey
usey ahsas honey tak
Hamarey khaak honey tak
Usey jo zulm tha karna
To phir mazboot hasti ko mazalim k liye chunta
K main to yunn bhi nazuk hun
Zara si baat pa main toot kar bikhri hi jati hun
Wo ye sub kyun nahi samjha.?
Kyun apni be-hissi main aaj wo madhosh betha hai.?
Kyun apni zaat main gum hai.?
Usey koi to batlaye.
K hum pal pal bhikhartey hain
Yunhi din raat honey tak
Zamaney beet jaingey
Usey ahsas honey tak
Hamarey khaak honey tak

(NOSH)

[Tanha Hassan]

Re: *~* Zamaney beet jain gey *~*

wah wah kamal hai buth he khoobsoorat poetry

[Cute Ruba]

Re: *~* Zamaney beet jain gey *~*

wah wah kamal hai buth he khoobsoorat poetry

thanks alot....:):)

[kutkutariyaan]

Re: *~* Zamaney beet jain gey *~*

Bohut Khoob chiips

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: *~* Zamaney beet jain gey *~*

Bahot khoob janab achhi nazam likhi hai aap ne

[Cute Ruba]

Re: *~* Zamaney beet jain gey *~*

Bohut Khoob chiips

thanks alot...
khosh rahiye

[Cute Ruba]

Re: *~* Zamaney beet jain gey *~*

Bahot khoob janab achhi nazam likhi hai aap ne

thanks alot...
khosh rahiye....

[Mahvish Waqas]

Re: *~* Zamaney beet jain gey *~*

Assalam o Alaikum WR WB..

Bohat umdah likha hai aap ne...
Bohat khoob..
khush rahain..

[Cute Ruba]

Re: *~* Zamaney beet jain gey *~*

Assalam o Alaikum WR WB..

Bohat umdah likha hai aap ne...
Bohat khoob..
khush rahain..

wasalam...
thanks alot...

[thefire1]

Re: *~* Zamaney beet jain gey *~*

Assalaam-O-Alaikum

Wah itna bukhta ehsaas, iss main qarb bhi hay, shikyat bhi, door andeshi bhi hay aur hikayat bhi.... kia baat hay, waqayi aap ki tehreer aur fafkeer qabil-e-tehseen hay. keep writing and sharing with us, khush rahyeh

[Cute Ruba]

Re: *~* Zamaney beet jain gey *~*

Assalaam-O-Alaikum

Wah itna bukhta ehsaas, iss main qarb bhi hay, shikyat bhi, door andeshi bhi hay aur hikayat bhi.... kia baat hay, waqayi aap ki tehreer aur fafkeer qabil-e-tehseen hay. keep writing and sharing with us, khush rahyeh

wasalam.
thank u so much...
khosh rahiye...