Shaam Hony ko hi,,,,,

[fazal khan]

,,,,Shaam Hony ko hi,,,,


,,,,Shaam Hony ko hi,,,,
Gaon main shaam hony ko hai,
Dehqaan,charwaahy our prindy,
anpy gharon ko lot rahy hain,
ik oonchy teely pe,
,,,tanha,,,,
betha sabko
jata dekh raha hon,,,,,
soch raha hon,,
ik din jab shaam hony ko hogi,,
main bhi apny ghar jaon ga,,,,

(fazal khan marwat)

[Tanha Hassan]

Re: Shaam Hony ko hi,,,,,

buth h khoobsoorat sharing hai aap key khush rahey

[fazal khan]

Re: Shaam Hony ko hi,,,,,

buth h khoobsoorat sharing hai aap key khush rahey

Bahut shukria ji ALLAH apko bhi humesha khush rakhy (AAMIN):slam1:

[_Dard_Aashna_]

Re: Shaam Hony ko hi,,,,,

pardes ka dukha ..........

nice fazal

[kutkutariyaan]

Re: Shaam Hony ko hi,,,,,

Bohut Fazal sahab chiips

[life.]

Re: Shaam Hony ko hi,,,,,

nice.................

[fazal khan]

Re: Shaam Hony ko hi,,,,,

pardes ka dukha ..........

nice fazal

Bahut shukria ji humesha khush rakhy.....

[fazal khan]

Re: Shaam Hony ko hi,,,,,

Bohut Fazal sahab chiips

Bahut shukria ji ALLAH apko bhi humesha khush rakhy (AAMIN)

[fazal khan]

Re: Shaam Hony ko hi,,,,,

nice.................

Bahut shukria.....God Bless U,,,,,,

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Shaam Hony ko hi,,,,,

Waah ji bahot khoob janab nice poetry

[fazal khan]

Re: Shaam Hony ko hi,,,,,

Waah ji bahot khoob janab nice poetry

Bahut bahut shukria Wasi Anjum ji apka.......:tunn:

[haya seher]

Re: Shaam Hony ko hi,,,,,

Bahoot Umda....

[fazal khan]

Re: Shaam Hony ko hi,,,,,

Bahoot Umda....

thank u so much

[*Hala*]

Re: Shaam Hony ko hi,,,,,

buht acha lekha hai apni ... khush rahein

[thefire1]

Re: Shaam Hony ko hi,,,,,

Assalaam-O-Alaikum

Wah Fazal, kia soch hay bohat khoob, pardes main reh kar apnay watan ki kami aap jis shiddat say mehsoos kar rahay hain uss ko aap ki shayeri kay alfaaz bakhoobi bayan kar rahay hain, isi tarah apni shayeri hum sab say share kartay rahyeh, khush rahyeh.

Fi Amaan ALLAH