Bheegi hein aankhen thehra hai har pal

[Aania]

Bheegi hein aankhen thehra hai har pal
aaj pir dil bohat udaas hai.....

wo do pal ka milna, jab bhi milna
kahin khushi nahen hai, mohabbat nahen hai....

mujh se kion khafa ho, meri kia khata hai?
tum khud hi chahtey the meri nafi ho....
(nafi =exculding)

mohabbat kero ge , mohabbat miley gi
ye dil janta tha IS pal se pehley....

yun milna tumhara, bicharrna tumhara
mil gaye to socha tum hi zindagi ho....

bicharrna tumhara wo mujrim nigahen
bharosa mera thaa , toota to kiyaa....?

bheegi hein aankhen, thehra hai har pal
aaj phir dil bohat udaas hai.....!!!!



by, Me (A )

[Kainat]

Re: Bheegi hein aankhen thehra hai har pal

wo do pal ka milna, jab bhi milna
kahin khushi nahen hai, mohabbat nahen hai....

mujh se kion khafa ho, meri kia khata hai?
tum khud hi chahtey the meri nafi ho....
(nafi =exculding)

mohabbat kero ge , mohabbat miley gi
ye dil janta tha IS pal se pehley....

yun milna tumhara, bicharrna tumhara
mil gaye to socha tum hi zindagi ho....

bicharrna tumhara wo mujrim nigahen
bharosa mera thaa , toota to kiyaa....?


wah wah aap ki poetry ka koi jawab nahi :thmbup: buhat hi khoob ..keep postingAaina sis :) :rose

[Aania]

Re: Bheegi hein aankhen thehra hai har pal

wo do pal ka milna, jab bhi milna
kahin khushi nahen hai, mohabbat nahen hai....

mujh se kion khafa ho, meri kia khata hai?
tum khud hi chahtey the meri nafi ho....
(nafi =exculding)

mohabbat kero ge , mohabbat miley gi
ye dil janta tha IS pal se pehley....

yun milna tumhara, bicharrna tumhara
mil gaye to socha tum hi zindagi ho....

bicharrna tumhara wo mujrim nigahen
bharosa mera thaa , toota to kiyaa....?


wah wah aap ki poetry ka koi jawab nahi :thmbup: buhat hi khoob ..keep postingAaina sis :) :rose

thnx u so much... Kaiinat... bohat khush rahye... :rose

[Kainat]

Re: Bheegi hein aankhen thehra hai har pal

U're welcome Aaina sis :) :rose

[Aania]

Re: Bheegi hein aankhen thehra hai har pal

thnx Kaini ... bohat khush raho... :rose

[rehman]

Re: Bheegi hein aankhen thehra hai har pal

wah wonderful.............. :)

[Aania]

Re: Bheegi hein aankhen thehra hai har pal

Thnx Rehman ....

[refreshing_breeze]

Re: Bheegi hein aankhen thehra hai har pal

bohat khubsoorat likha hai :rose

[uzair143]

Re: Bheegi hein aankhen thehra hai har pal

zaberdast
kia khob likha hai
keep it up
Uzair

[naz]

Re: Bheegi hein aankhen thehra hai har pal

Aaniaaaaaaaaa gud :x

[La'hasil]

Re: Bheegi hein aankhen thehra hai har pal

Hmmm Buhat Khooob

[Shakh-e-Tamana]

Re: Bheegi hein aankhen thehra hai har pal

buhat zaberdast lhika hai Aania...

[Hashim Raza]

Re: Bheegi hein aankhen thehra hai har pal

nice one
khush rahin