Dubai ja kar chaey pya kariengey

[dr athar hussain siddiqui]

wafa karogey wah wah krain gey
gar jafa b karogey jafa saheingey
ham talab gar hein doloron key
jitney bhi do gey duaa karein gey
hamein kam hey bus mal bananey se
jo kaha karogey wo kaha kareingey
bat bey bat deitey ho dhamkian
kardia itna kam aur kya karein gey
chinee khatam hogaey gar bazar mein
dubai ja kar chaey pya karein gey
athar ko is se zyada nahin khahish
her mah naya hotel kharida kareingey
(athar hussain siddiqui al marof ibne sultan narvi)

[*Rida*]

Re: Dubai ja kar chaey pya kariengey

buht khooob.....buht acha likha hai aap nay ..... isi trah likhtay rehain aur ham say share kartay rehain.....:thmbup:

[kutkutariyaan]

Re: Dubai ja kar chaey pya kariengey

wafa karogey wah wah krain gey
gar jafa b karogey jafa saheingey
ham talab gar hein doloron key
jitney bhi do gey duaa karein gey
hamein kam hey bus mal bananey se
jo kaha karogey wo kaha kareingey
bat bey bat deitey ho dhamkian
kardia itna kam aur kya karein gey
chinee khatam hogaey gar bazar mein
dubai ja kar chaey pya karein gey
athar ko is se zyada nahin khahish
her mah naya hotel kharida kareingey
(athar hussain siddiqui al marof ibne sultan narvi)

1st of all Welcome to Pegham :rose

bohut acha likhate hain aap ?

Thanks chiips

[thefire1]

Re: Dubai ja kar chaey pya kariengey

Assalaam-O-Alaikum

Bohot khoob janab, and welcome to pegham..

apni shayeri aur peghamaat isi tarah hum sab say share kartay rahyeh , khush rahyeh

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Dubai ja kar chaey pya kariengey

bahot khoob janab nice