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  • #2
    Re: ghzal,,itna bhi na choy

    very nice sharing Asif sahib
    I aM Not a complete Idiot......Some parts are Missing........

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    • #3
      Re: ghzal,,itna bhi na choy

      bahot khoob janab nice poetry
      keep it up
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      • #4
        Re: ghzal,,itna bhi na choy

        buht khoob.!!
        u can't gain RESPECT by choice nor by requesting it... it is earned through your words & actions."

        :pr:

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        • #5
          Re: ghzal,,itna bhi na choy

          Wah janab bohat khoob, bohat hi achay andaaz main aap nay apnay dili jazbaat ko ba-asaani qalamband kar dia, nihayat nafasat kay saath aur bohat hi sehal alfaaz main, mujhay yeh ADAWAT waala sha'air bohat acha laga, kay adawat ki dewaar itni bhi mazboot nahin hoti agar mohabbat qayim hay tou uss kay samnat har adawaat ki dewaar masmaar hosakti hay, bas ek baar uss dewaar kay uss paar moujood mohabbat ko tou jhank kar dekho. bohat acha message bhi diya aap nay apni shaaeri say, likhtay rahain janab, khush rahyeh
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          • #6
            Re: ghzal,,itna bhi na choy

            Assalam o Alikum wr wb Asif Sahab..

            Bohat umdah ghazal paish ki hai aap ne...
            Acha likhnay waloon se hum sikhnay waloon ko rahnomai milti hai...
            Bohat Khoob...
            Khush rahain..


            میرے الفاظ ہی پردہ ہیں میرے چہرے کا


            میں ہوں خاموش جہاں ، مجھ کو وہاں سے سنئیے

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