Mehboob ki gali aur danday!! :)

[thefire1]

Assalaam-O-Alaikum Dear ALL

Apnay college main likhnay ka bohat shouq tha, ek competition main humain "MEHBOOB KI GALI" ka mouzoo dia gaya aur uss per kuch likhnay ka kaha gaya, bas tou kia tha yeh nazm likh dee aur prize bhi haasil kia:)


MEHBOOB KI GALI AUR DANDAY

Itnay paRay Hain sar Per Danday Teri Gali Main
Armaan Huway Hain Saaray Thanday Teri Gali Main


Ek Haath Main Hay Kangi, Zulfain Sawanrtay Hain
Seenay Per Haath Rakh Kar, Tujh Ko Pukartay Hain
Ab Kia Batayain Zaalim, Hum Kiyon Guzartay Hain
Sunday Teri Gali Main, Monday Teri Gali Main


Itnay paRay Hain sar Per Danday Teri Gali Main
Armaan Huway Hain Saaray Thanday Teri Gali Main


Tujh Per Nazar Thi, Apnay, Anjaam Per Nahin Thi
Yeh Haal Ho Ga Pit Kar Hum Ko Khabar Nahin Thi
Nazr-e-Karam Thi Teri, Laikin Idhar Nahin Thi
Hum GaRhnay Chalay Thay, Jhanday Teri Gali Main


Itnay paRay Hain sar Per Danday Teri Gali Main
Armaan Huway Hain Saaray Thanday Teri Gali Main


Tu Nay O Bay Reham, Hum Ko Bohat Sataaya
Sandal Dikha Dikha Kay, Hum Ko Bohat Bhagaya
A Bay Reham Tujh Ko, Hum Per Reham Na Aaya
Hum Khudhkushi Karay Gain OneDay Teri Gali Main


Itnay paRay Hain sar Per Danday Teri Gali Main
Armaan Huway Hain Saaray Thanday Teri Gali Main


Jootay Utha Kar Ab Tou, Huway Hum Rawaana
Par Haq Giz Na Khatam Hoga, Yeh Ishq Ka Fasana
Dhondh Hi Lain Gain, Koi Deedaar Ka Bahaana
Baicha Karain Gain, Aakar, Anday Teri Gali Main


Itnay paRay Hain sar Per Danday Teri Gali Main
Armaan Huway Hain Saaray Thanday Teri Gali Main

Khush rahyeh :)

[Tanha Hassan]

Re: Mehboob ki gali aur danday!! :)

Beautiful poetry:tunn:

aap ney aap beeti likh he daey..........372-haha

Bari khuwish theee aap key aap beeti pahrhey k :khi:

Kitney din hospital mein guzraney parey yeh to batia he nahi372-haha

[thefire1]

Re: Mehboob ki gali aur danday!! :)

Meray khaayal main khamooshi hi main aafiyat hay :)

[Tanha Hassan]

Re: Mehboob ki gali aur danday!! :)

Zardari wala byain nahi dena ....chalyin aap muj ko bta dayin main kisi ko nahi batoo ga

[thefire1]

Re: Mehboob ki gali aur danday!! :)

Kia batayoon kay kahan kahan danday paRay aur kaisay kaisay zakhm lagay... public forum hay kuch tou lihaaz karain... aap bhi na!!!!

[Tanha Hassan]

Re: Mehboob ki gali aur danday!! :)

372-haha

bara maza aeya ho ga aap ko be free mein malish kerva k :lol

[thefire1]

Re: Mehboob ki gali aur danday!! :)

lagta hay abhi tak aap ko paRay nahin hain danday warna yeh jo khilkhila kar hans rahay hain na uss kay qaabil nahin rehtay... aur phir pata chalta kay maza aaya ya kuch aur lolzzzz :) Agar aap kahain tou humari khidmaat haazir hay aap ko FREE KI MAALISH karnay kay liye lolzzzz

[Tanha Hassan]

Re: Mehboob ki gali aur danday!! :)

372-haha

main khudh he walk ker loon ga main nahi cahta k mari waja sey marey bahi k hatho ko takleef ho................aap malish kervana jari rakhey agli bar aap ko WWF mein bajjyin gaey 372-haha

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Mehboob ki gali aur danday!! :)

:khi:

waah waah janab bahot zabrdast kiya baat hai aap ki

[thefire1]

Re: Mehboob ki gali aur danday!! :)

372-haha

main khudh he walk ker loon ga main nahi cahta k mari waja sey marey bahi k hatho ko takleef ho................aap malish kervana jari rakhey agli bar aap ko WWF mein bajjyin gaey 372-haha

Koi baat nahin aap kay liye takleef bardasht kar lain gain.... agli baar kab? ab aisa koi iraada nahin, ab tou main hoon, ghar hay, masjid hay, office hay :)

[thefire1]

Re: Mehboob ki gali aur danday!! :)

:khi:

waah waah janab bahot zabrdast kiya baat hai aap ki

Pasand karnay ka bohat shukriya Wasi sahab, aap jaisay mukammal shair say yeh daad wasool hona baRay hi aizaaz ki baat hay, Shurkiya and khush rahyeh :)

[Rosy]

Re: Mehboob ki gali aur danday!! :)

Assalaam-O-Alaikum Dear ALL

Apnay college main likhnay ka bohat shouq tha, ek competition main humain "MEHBOOB KI GALI" ka mouzoo dia gaya aur uss per kuch likhnay ka kaha gaya, bas tou kia tha yeh nazm likh dee aur prize bhi haasil kia:)


MEHBOOB KI GALI AUR DANDAY

Itnay paRay Hain sar Per Danday Teri Gali Main
Armaan Huway Hain Saaray Thanday Teri Gali Main


Ek Haath Main Hay Kangi, Zulfain Sawanrtay Hain
Seenay Per Haath Rakh Kar, Tujh Ko Pukartay Hain
Ab Kia Batayain Zaalim, Hum Kiyon Guzartay Hain
Sunday Teri Gali Main, Monday Teri Gali Main


Itnay paRay Hain sar Per Danday Teri Gali Main
Armaan Huway Hain Saaray Thanday Teri Gali Main


Tujh Per Nazar Thi, Apnay, Anjaam Per Nahin Thi
Yeh Haal Ho Ga Pit Kar Hum Ko Khabar Nahin Thi
Nazr-e-Karam Thi Teri, Laikin Idhar Nahin Thi
Hum GaRhnay Chalay Thay, Jhanday Teri Gali Main


Itnay paRay Hain sar Per Danday Teri Gali Main
Armaan Huway Hain Saaray Thanday Teri Gali Main


Tu Nay O Bay Reham, Hum Ko Bohat Sataaya
Sandal Dikha Dikha Kay, Hum Ko Bohat Bhagaya
A Bay Reham Tujh Ko, Hum Per Reham Na Aaya
Hum Khudhkushi Karay Gain OneDay Teri Gali Main


Itnay paRay Hain sar Per Danday Teri Gali Main
Armaan Huway Hain Saaray Thanday Teri Gali Main


Jootay Utha Kar Ab Tou, Huway Hum Rawaana
Par Haq Giz Na Khatam Hoga, Yeh Ishq Ka Fasana
Dhondh Hi Lain Gain, Koi Deedaar Ka Bahaana
Baicha Karain Gain, Aakar, Anday Teri Gali Main


Itnay paRay Hain sar Per Danday Teri Gali Main
Armaan Huway Hain Saaray Thanday Teri Gali Main

Khush rahyeh :)

WalikumAssalam,

hmmm bahut acchi nazam hai yeh nazam mein ne kaheen aur bhi parih hai bahhut accha likha hai aap ne...
bahut khoob :phool:

[thefire1]

Re: Mehboob ki gali aur danday!! :)

bohat nawaazish pasand karnay ki :) Haan iss say pehlay bhi main nay isay urdu sites per post kia tha aur aik international mushairay main janab-e-John Aliya kay saath bhi issay paRhnay ka mouqa mila tha... bas achay naseeb samajh lain warna humari shaeri tou bas gali koochoon main sunaanay waali hay... do char dost hans laitay hain tou mujhay khushi hojaati hay, yeh hay mera hasil-e-zindagi :) dosroon kay cheray per muskurahat bikhairna!

[Rosy]

Re: Mehboob ki gali aur danday!! :)

bohat nawaazish pasand karnay ki :) Haan iss say pehlay bhi main nay isay urdu sites per post kia tha aur aik international mushairay main janab-e-John Aliya kay saath bhi issay paRhnay ka mouqa mila tha... bas achay naseeb samajh lain warna humari shaeri tou bas gali koochoon main sunaanay waali hay... do char dost hans laitay hain tou mujhay khushi hojaati hay, yeh hay mera hasil-e-zindagi :) dosroon kay cheray per muskurahat bikhairna!

Aray wah janaab bahut khoob.....
Keep shairing....

[Mahvish Waqas]

Re: Mehboob ki gali aur danday!! :)

Assalam o Alaikum wr wb Fire Sahab...

Bohat umdah aur bohat khoobsorat andaz-e-bayan hai aap ka :)
Parh ker lotoof aya....
Yaqeenan ab aap kay new kalam ka intizaar rahay ga...
Khush rahain aur isi tarhan humain hasatay rahain :)
W Asalam o Alaikum wr wb