Main Ne Rusvaaiyon Ko Jalana Hi Munasib Samjha

[muntazir296]

Main Ne Rusvaaiyon Ko Jalana Hi Munasib Samjha,

Ab To Har Shiddat-E-Aafat Ko Muhafiz Samjha.


Har Ek Manzar Jo Guzre Thai Sharminda Ho Kar,

Un Har Ek Lamhat-E-Hiqarat Ko Muhajir Samjha.


Kal Tak Jo Rehte Thai Mere Pehlu Main Aashna Ho Kar,

Aaj Logon Ne Kiun Unhe Mera Qatil Samjha?


Muntazir Faani Hai, Mit Jaayega Nahin Is Main Koi Shaq,

Fir Na Aana Meri Qurbat Pe Ke Uth Mujhe Ishq Samjha.

By Muntazir
5:26 p.m 12/09/2009 at Office

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Main Ne Rusvaaiyon Ko Jalana Hi Munasib Samjha

Achhi koshish hai janab

[Mahvish Waqas]

Re: Main Ne Rusvaaiyon Ko Jalana Hi Munasib Samjha

Assalam o alaikum wr wb..

Bohat umdah...
Khush rahain..

[thefire1]

Re: Main Ne Rusvaaiyon Ko Jalana Hi Munasib Samjha

Bohat hi achi koshish hay janab, bohat hi achay alfaaz aap nay istimaal kiye hain, magar kahin kuch kami see lag rahi hay, aap ek baar phir apni ghazal ko khudh hi paRhain aur mujhay yaqeen hay kay aap khudh hi iss main kuch wazan paida karain gain :) likhtay rahain janab, bohat acha likhtay hain aap, Khush rahyeh

[shummu]

Re: Main Ne Rusvaaiyon Ko Jalana Hi Munasib Samjha

waqaii achchi koshish hai..thora aur mashq se behtar banaya jaa skata hai...waise is koshisis pe daad pesh hai!

[S.Athar]

Re: Main Ne Rusvaaiyon Ko Jalana Hi Munasib Samjha

Nice.