Khayal

[Mahvish Waqas]

Assalam o alaikum wr wb

[Mani16]

Re: Khayal

Bht Bht Bht Bht Bht zabardast kamal ki Poetry hy Janab
Thanks 4 Sharing Wid us
Amazing But I thin 6th linwe me jo "Hee" lagaya hy iski zarurat nhi hy
kha makhah Nazm ki rawani ko intrrupt ker reha hy
But You can Decide better what is Better
Ye sirf mera ana khiaal hy Nothing ELC,,,,

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Khayal

waah bahot khoobsurat Nazam likhi hai aap ne
keep it up

[life.]

Re: Khayal

nice

[Mahvish Waqas]

Re: Khayal

Assalam o alaikum wr wb..

Pasand karnay ka bohat shukria...