~*~PoEmS bY cRyStA~*~

[crystal_thinking]

Re: ~*~PoEmS bY cRyStA~*~

Han!
men ny mana hy
to he mre zindagi hy
to he mre bandagi hy
phoolon ki khushbu c
jo hawa chupky sy churati hy
Han!
to wohi hy mry liya
BARISH ki choti bondo men
aqas rango ka jo hota hy
Han!
to wohi hy jo ly kr aya
mry dil k angan men
khushion ki barat
jis ny mre
qara sochon men
or
sakoot bhary khayalon men
halchal ki jhankar bajae
Han!
to woji hy jis ka Aqas
sapno ki jheel men
jhilmilata hy
Han!
to wohi hy
jo pas-e-manzar men ho k
nazar mjko aat hy
Han!
to wohi hy
jis k lya ham y
wafaon ka bharam rakha hy......

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: ~*~PoEmS bY cRyStA~*~

Bahot khoob crystal bahot khoobsurat Nazam likhi hai aap ne very nice

[crystal_thinking]

Re: ~*~PoEmS bY cRyStA~*~

thank u so much wasi g.... ALLAH BLESS U:rose...

[thefire1]

Re: ~*~PoEmS bY cRyStA~*~

Waah janab, bohat hi khoobsurat andaz-e-bayan hay... baRi hi nafaasat say aap nay apni soch ko lafzoon ki laRiyon main pirooya hay jis say aap kay aala zouq ka andaaz hota hay... sab hi nazm aur ghazlain kamal ki hain magar na jaanay kiyon yeh ashaar paRh kar chehray per ajeeb sa tabassum bikhar gaya jo na qabil-e-bayan hay, kiyonki main bhi iss tabassum ki waja nahin jaanta, shayed kuch ziayda hi haqeeqat say qareeb hain yeh ashaar...
justajo yhe the k koi parsa milta
koi maseha milta koi mehrban milta
dashat-e-beyaqeni k alam sy
khof o hiras k ghambhir waswaso sy
is qalab-e-bechain k nasoor ka
apnay pyar k marham say madawa krta
justajo to yhe the k koi parsa milta

Isi tarhan apni shaaeri say humain mustafeed kartay rahain, bohat khoob :)

[crystal_thinking]

Re: ~*~PoEmS bY cRyStA~*~

pasand karnay ka shukriya Thefire g..be happy:rose

[crystal_thinking]

Re: ~*~PoEmS bY cRyStA~*~

:rose

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: ~*~PoEmS bY cRyStA~*~

waah bahot khoobsurat Nazam likhi hai aap ne crystal ji,
very nice

[crystal_thinking]

Re: ~*~PoEmS bY cRyStA~*~

thank u wasi g:rose

[*Hala*]

Re: ~*~PoEmS bY cRyStA~*~

MASHALLAH!! app be lekhti hai... humein pata nahi tha... :(
buht hai khubsurat lekhi hai.... lekhti raho or khush raho

[crystal_thinking]

Re: ~*~PoEmS bY cRyStA~*~

thanx Hala jani... bs likhny ki try kri the ab nai likhti yeh sb poems school tym period ki hen usk bad kuch he poems likhn the ab chor dea hy likhna... thanx again.. ALLAH BLESS U

[kutkutariyaan]

Re: ~*~PoEmS bY cRyStA~*~

Once again Great Shot :hansi

[thefire1]

Re: ~*~PoEmS bY cRyStA~*~

Wah bohat hi khoob, bohat hi umda andaaz-e-bayan hay aap ka.... school time main itni mature soch tou ab kia aalam hoga, humari guzarish per hi sahi kuch aaj bhi likhain mujhay yaqeen hay dil kay taroon ko cho jayey gi aap ki tehreer... bohat hi acha aur nafees andaaz hay aap ka waqayi aap ka kalaam aap kay nick ki numaindagi karta hay, bohat hi crystal.... likhti rahain... kehtay hain na ka agar likhnay ki aadat khatam hogayi tou dimagh aur soch per zang paR jayay ga aur phir waqt ka WD40 bhi iss zang ko khatam nahin kar payay ga :) Khush Rahyeh