""tum merey paas aa jao naa""

[Aania]

""tum merey paas aa jao naa""
apney sab dukh batlao naa..
phir se meri dharrkan ko
tum apney lams se barhao naa....

tum merey paas aa jao naa

merye khuwabon ko mehka do naa..
merey honton ko phir se khila do na...
tum merey paas aa jao naa...

meri aankhon main bas jaao naa
meri zindagi ka ik ik pal
apni muskurahaton se mehka do naa
chamkaa do naa....

tum merey paas aa jao naa....

mera dil chahey
meri aarzoo ho...
teri aankhon main khushion ke
rang rang chamken..
ye bhi mera dil chahey...
pal pal zindagi tujhko
muskurati gungunati miley
tujhey khuwbon ki tabeer miley..

tum merey paas aa jao naa..

sirf merey ho jaao naa...
tum merey paas aa jao naa...
""""tum merey paas aa jao naaa...."""


by, me ( A )

[Yaaram]

Re: ""tum merey paas aa jao naa""

Aik hasrat aur Dua se bharpoor nazm ......bohat kamal ka likha hay aur be ikhtyar likha hay bohat shukrya aur bohat aala.....likhti rahien InshAllah :)

[Aania]

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Aik hasrat aur Dua se bharpoor nazm ......bohat kamal ka likha hay aur be ikhtyar likha hay bohat shukrya aur bohat aala.....likhti rahien InshAllah :)

:hug: thnx u so much dearooo... :hug:

[khurram_shaikh]

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Assalaam o alekum,


waaah bahooot khoob bahoot umdeh kalaam share kiyaa aania aapnien dili daad qabool karien khush rahien

[Hassan]

Re: ""tum merey paas aa jao naa""

zara chotii nzm likha krrooo
sari kahani likh dayti ho
HSN

[Aania]

Re: ""tum merey paas aa jao naa""

Assalaam o alekum,


waaah bahooot khoob bahoot umdeh kalaam share kiyaa aania aapnien dili daad qabool karien khush rahien

thnx u so much khurram :rose

[Aania]

Re: ""tum merey paas aa jao naa""

zara chotii nzm likha krrooo
sari kahani likh dayti ho
HSN

[rehman]

Re: ""tum merey paas aa jao naa""

""tum merey paas aa jao naa""
apney sab dukh batlao naa..
phir se meri dharrkan ko
tum apney lams se barhao naa....

tum merey paas aa jao naa

merye khuwabon ko mehka do naa..
merey honton ko phir se khila do na...
tum merey paas aa jao naa...

meri aankhon main bas jaao naa
meri zindagi ka ik ik pal
apni muskurahaton se mehka do naa
chamkaa do naa....

tum merey paas aa jao naa....

mera dil chahey
meri aarzoo ho...
teri aankhon main khushion ke
rang rang chamken..
ye bhi mera dil chahey...
pal pal zindagi tujhko
muskurati gungunati miley
tujhey khuwbon ki tabeer miley..

tum merey paas aa jao naa..

sirf merey ho jaao naa...
tum merey paas aa jao naa...
""""tum merey paas aa jao naaa...."""


by, me ( A )

hmmmmmm.... itni piyari aur full romantic me nay parhi nahi thi ..... wese apas ki baaat hai iss forum ki pehli romantic poetry parh raha hoon:tauba .... thanks for sharing.....

[Kainat]

Re: ""tum merey paas aa jao naa""

tum merey paas aa jao naa....

mera dil chahey
meri aarzoo ho...
teri aankhon main khushion ke
rang rang chamken..
ye bhi mera dil chahey...
pal pal zindagi tujhko
muskurati gungunati miley
tujhey khuwbon ki tabeer miley..

tum merey paas aa jao naa..

sirf merey ho jaao naa...
tum merey paas aa jao naa...
""""tum merey paas aa jao naaa...."""


by, me ( A )

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WOWWWw Very Beautiful Words Aaina sis :thmbup: :eye: aaj Dil khush ho gaya hai u ki poem parh k :ghug: agar u ki Ijaazat ho tu kya me u ki ye poem apni Diary may likh saktee hun ya nahi :cc:

[Aania]

Re: ""tum merey paas aa jao naa""

tum merey paas aa jao naa....

mera dil chahey
meri aarzoo ho...
teri aankhon main khushion ke
rang rang chamken..
ye bhi mera dil chahey...
pal pal zindagi tujhko
muskurati gungunati miley
tujhey khuwbon ki tabeer miley..

tum merey paas aa jao naa..

sirf merey ho jaao naa...
tum merey paas aa jao naa...
""""tum merey paas aa jao naaa...."""


by, me ( A )

WOWWWw Very Beautiful Words Aaina sis :thmbup: :eye: aaj Dil khush ho gaya hai u ki poem parh k :ghug: agar u ki Ijaazat ho tu kya me u ki ye poem apni Diary may likh saktee hun ya nahi :cc:

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thnx u so much ...Kainii... bohat khush raho.. jahan chaho save ker lo likh lo... :rose full ijazat hai.. aur ijazat leney ki zaroorat nahen sohnye... khush raho sis...

[shazz1676]

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[:rose "Hum say door jawo gay kaise
dil say humey bhulawo gay kaisey
hum wo khushbo hay jo sanso may bastey hay
khud ki sanso ko rook pawo gay kaise"

[shazz1676]

Re: ""tum merey paas aa jao naa""

hello sister
kia khoob lika hay tum na

laking buhat ziyada hay plz kuch to short likka karo na

yaad hi nahi hota

aur dosri baat ye k humra bheja bhi tora sa weak hay
so ziyada lamba samaj may nahi ata

[Aania]

Re: ""tum merey paas aa jao naa""

hello sister
kia khoob lika hay tum na

laking buhat ziyada hay plz kuch to short likka karo na

yaad hi nahi hota

aur dosri baat ye k humra bheja bhi tora sa weak hay
so ziyada lamba samaj may nahi ata

thnx to like it .. hmmm ... ye to already bohat choti si nazam hai .. aap ko do lines ke Ashar achey lagtey hein ghaliban .. chalye try karen ge .. thnx to appreciate :rose khush rahye