Tum Yaad Aatey ho

['SamRazi']

Tum Yaad Aatey ho

Din ki khamoshion main Tum yaad aatey ho
Raat ki tanhaiyon main tum yaad aatey ho

Chalti hoon Tanha Jeewan ki Weeran Raho'n per
Hath koi jo thamey to Tum yaad aatey ho

Sulagtey hain Zakhm' hoti hain Ankhein nam meri
Koi ponchey mere Anso to tum yaad aatey ho

Shab ke sanaton main Chamaktey chand ko jab
Raat se lipta dekhon to Tum yaad aatey ho

Teri nigahon main sada Aks apna dekha hai
Aaina jo kabhi dekhon to Tum yaad aatey ho

Sari Qasmein, sarey waday Palbhar main toot gayeh
Sapna koi naya sajaoun to Tum yaad aatey ho

Kayi baar Dil ki Basti se teri Yaad mitana chahi
Her baar magar bhooley se hi Tum yaad aatey ho

[Masood]

Re: Tum Yaad Aatey ho

Teri nigahon main sada Aks apna dekha hai
Aaina ko kabhi dekhon to Tum yaad aatey ho

Bohat khoob aur achha likha hai Saima. Kuchh ehsaas ko biyaan karna mushkil hota hai, magar aap ney is kalaam mein un ko achhi tarha biyaan kiya hai. Aik rawani hai aur alfaaz ko achha istimaal kiya hai :rose likhti raha karein :)

[Jothic]

Re: Tum Yaad Aatey ho

Assalam O ALikum
hello Miss.Shaheen

waisay mein nay kabhee nahee soncha tha ke mein aap ko itna yaad aata hoon ..
pata hota tu mein kaheen door chala jaata tu aap ko yaad na aata ...

hehehehe ....
just kinda kiddin'
bura na maanyeah ga
okz
byee

[Yaaram]

Re: Tum Yaad Aatey ho

Bohat umdah likha hay aapne ........likhti rhaye :)

[hayaa_n]

Re: Tum Yaad Aatey ho

Saima ji saada aur umda kalaam read kar k bouhat achcha laga.keep sharing.:)

[rehman]

Re: Tum Yaad Aatey ho

zabardast saima jee..... yeh peotry mujhe itni achi lagi kay meinay iss ki print lay lee hai....

[rehman]

Re: Tum Yaad Aatey ho

Bohat khoob aur achha likha hai Saima. Kuchh ehsaas ko biyaan karna mushkil hota hai, magar aap ney is kalaam mein un ko achhi tarha biyaan kiya hai. Aik rawani hai aur alfaaz ko achha istimaal kiya hai :rose likhti raha karein :)

kiya yeh poetry saima nay khud likhi hai????

['SamRazi']

Re: Tum Yaad Aatey ho

Bohat umdah likha hay aapne ........likhti rhaye :)

Shukriay, khush rahiyeh

['SamRazi']

Re: Tum Yaad Aatey ho

Bohat khoob aur achha likha hai Saima. Kuchh ehsaas ko biyaan karna mushkil hota hai, magar aap ney is kalaam mein un ko achhi tarha biyaan kiya hai. Aik rawani hai aur alfaaz ko achha istimaal kiya hai :rose likhti raha karein :)

Hosla afzaiyee ka buhut buhut shukriya Masood :)

['SamRazi']

Re: Tum Yaad Aatey ho

Saima ji saada aur umda kalaam read kar k bouhat achcha laga.keep sharing.:)

Shukriya Hayaan

['SamRazi']

Re: Tum Yaad Aatey ho

zabardast saima jee..... yeh peotry mujhe itni achi lagi kay meinay iss ki print lay lee hai....

Pasnad kerne ka shukriya :rose

kiya yeh poetry saima nay khud likhi hai????

Nahi to kya mere farishton en likhi hai

[W&S]

Re: Tum Yaad Aatey ho

Nahi to kya mere farishton en likhi hai

Tumhara farishta yani main :D

buhut achi likhi hai
aisi udaad kiu sweet sam tum aisa kiu likhti ho :(

[Aania]

Re: Tum Yaad Aatey ho

kiya yeh poetry saima nay khud likhi hai????

haan ji.... :rose

"main shair to nahen" is actually Pegham's Poet club.
what ever poetry is coming here.. originally written by the people of pegham... If you write by urself u can also share that here.. thank you.. take care..be happy always... :rose
:phool:



@Saima.... Very nice Saima... keep it up

['SamRazi']

Re: Tum Yaad Aatey ho

@Saima.... Very nice Saima... keep it up

Thnx Aany :rose

[~Aashoo~]

Re: Tum Yaad Aatey ho

really nice Saima:)
thxx for sharing