Teri hay rah juda mai.N alag musafir hoo.N.. aik ghazal meri

[tahirraza]

Salam

Umeed hay achay hongay ap loog....aik nowarid hoon is mehfil main ....apni aik ghazal paish kar raha hoon...passand aye to raye dijiyga


tahir



Teri hay rah juda mai.N alag musafir hoo.N
kay tu sakoo.N kay liyay,mai.N fana ki khatir hooN


Tu meri zaat kay sab zawiyey talash na ker
mai.N ishq mai.N hoon, khirad ki hadoon say bahir hooN


Mujhay na bool kay phir chair fasanay dil kay
sarapa derd hoo.N ahd e jafa ka shair hoo.N


Teri talab hay sitaroo.N ki kehkishaa.N ki magar
mai.N khak per hoon bus ik bay nisha.N musafir hooN


Khudi ko baich ker mai.N jeet tujh ko sonpoo.Nga
wafa shaa'ar hoo.N tujh sa kaha.N main shatir hoo.N


Raza jo ahl e nazar hai.N wo jantay hoongay
main.N khud mai.N dafn hoo.N, zinda agar bazahir hoo.N

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Teri hay rah juda mai.N alag musafir hoo.N.. aik ghazal meri

Sab se pehlay aap ko Nai shoraa mein Welcome kehte hain

bahot khoobsurat Ghazal likhi hai aap ne
aap ki mazeed sharings ka intzar rahega

[*khushi*]

Re: Teri hay rah juda mai.N alag musafir hoo.N.. aik ghazal meri

Walikumsalam
achi koshsih hai
likht3 rahy3
khush rahy3

[Gul]

Re: Teri hay rah juda mai.N alag musafir hoo.N.. aik ghazal meri

Salam

Umeed hay achay hongay ap loog....aik nowarid hoon is mehfil main ....apni aik ghazal paish kar raha hoon...passand aye to raye dijiyga


tahir



Teri hay rah juda mai.N alag musafir hoo.N
kay tu sakoo.N kay liyay,mai.N fana ki khatir hooN


Tu meri zaat kay sab zawiyey talash na ker
mai.N ishq mai.N hoon, khirad ki hadoon say bahir hooN


Mujhay na bool kay phir chair fasanay dil kay
sarapa derd hoo.N ahd e jafa ka shair hoo.N


Teri talab hay sitaroo.N ki kehkishaa.N ki magar
mai.N khak per hoon bus ik bay nisha.N musafir hooN


Khudi ko baich ker mai.N jeet tujh ko sonpoo.Nga
wafa shaa'ar hoo.N tujh sa kaha.N main shatir hoo.N


Raza jo ahl e nazar hai.N wo jantay hoongay
main.N khud mai.N dafn hoo.N, zinda agar bazahir hoo.N

Walekum assalam
aur Tah-e Dil se Khush Amdeed
Pegham per aur Iss section mein :)

aap ka naam kuch suna sa lag raha hai
Poetry tu mashaAllah aik dum achi hai...
Buhat achay aur mahirna adnaaz mein aap nay ghazl likhi

Sahre karti rahiyay :)

[tahirraza]

Re: Teri hay rah juda mai.N alag musafir hoo.N.. aik ghazal meri

salam

bohot shukriya ap ka Wasi sahab

zaroor apni kuch mazeed kawish share keroonga

tahir

Sab se pehlay aap ko Nai shoraa mein Welcome kehte hain

bahot khoobsurat Ghazal likhi hai aap ne
aap ki mazeed sharings ka intzar rahega

[tahirraza]

Re: Teri hay rah juda mai.N alag musafir hoo.N.. aik ghazal meri

bohot shukriya Khushi ap ka

Walikumsalam
achi koshsih hai
likht3 rahy3
khush rahy3

[tahirraza]

Re: Teri hay rah juda mai.N alag musafir hoo.N.. aik ghazal meri

salam

bohot shukriya ap ka is khaloos or apnayet ka

name commen sa hay mera shayad is waja say lag raha hoo...

khush rahiyay

tahir

Walekum assalam
aur Tah-e Dil se Khush Amdeed
Pegham per aur Iss section mein :)

aap ka naam kuch suna sa lag raha hai
Poetry tu mashaAllah aik dum achi hai...
Buhat achay aur mahirna adnaaz mein aap nay ghazl likhi

Sahre karti rahiyay :)

[Gul]

Re: Teri hay rah juda mai.N alag musafir hoo.N.. aik ghazal meri

oh aap ka nam tahir hai mein samjhi ..Tahira ..!
Sorry for that ...

[tahirraza]

Re: Teri hay rah juda mai.N alag musafir hoo.N.. aik ghazal meri

tahir....samajhnay ka shukriya... wesay maazrat ki koi baat nahi :)

oh aap ka nam tahir hai mein samjhi ..Tahira ..!
Sorry for that ...

[Gul]

Re: Teri hay rah juda mai.N alag musafir hoo.N.. aik ghazal meri

Share kartay rahein janab!! :)