Chaand Chaihra Aankh Sitara Likh Rahi Hu'n

[hayaa_n]

Asslmaoalikum :rose

[khurram_shaikh]

Re: Chaand Chaihra Aankh Sitara Likh Rahi Hu'n

Assalaam o alekum,


Jalti dhoop mai'n
Maang raahi hu'n
Maihkay'Thanday
Surkh gulaab
Mai'n paagal hu'n
Yeh kaisa nazaara
Likh raahi hu'n...

bhai waaaah kyaa baat hai itnaa umdeh aur behtreen kalaam ke alfaaz hi nahin mil rahe kyaa kahun shukriyaa humse share kernien kaa dili daad qabool karien khush rahien aur khoob likhti rahien yun

[hayaa_n]

Re: Chaand Chaihra Aankh Sitara Likh Rahi Hu'n

W.salaam
:jazak: :) khurram ji sach baat to yeh hay k main to dar rahi thi k pata nahi yeh main nay kaisa likha hay? forum par post karun k nahi? samajh hi nahi aaraha tha but post kar hi diya.aur aap ka itna umda reply read kar k dil khushi say bhar gaya.Allah aap ko khush rakhay.Aameen.:)

[Rabi]

Re: Chaand Chaihra Aankh Sitara Likh Rahi Hu'n

bohat accha likha aap nay haya sis
Judaai ki ghari
Mai'n faqat
Ronay ka bahaana
Likh rahi hu'n bohat accha

[hayaa_n]

Re: Chaand Chaihra Aankh Sitara Likh Rahi Hu'n

:jazak: :) Rabi aap ko acha laga mujhay bouhat khushi hui.:rose :)

[Yaaram]

Re: Chaand Chaihra Aankh Sitara Likh Rahi Hu'n

wah kya kehne .....zabardast kalam hay thanx for sharing :)

[hayaa_n]

Re: Chaand Chaihra Aankh Sitara Likh Rahi Hu'n

Adnan ji bouhat shukriya itnay umda reply ka.meri to samajh main nahi aa'raha tha k forum par post karun k nahi? bouhat shukriya Adnan ji k urdu main bhi compose kar diya. :jazak: :)

[rehman]

Re: Chaand Chaihra Aankh Sitara Likh Rahi Hu'n

tu aap azad shairi bhi karti hain...... bahut khoob likha hai....

[hayaa_n]

Re: Chaand Chaihra Aankh Sitara Likh Rahi Hu'n

tu aap azad shairi bhi karti hain...... bahut khoob likha hai....

Bouhat shukriya Rehman ji..ji han main is sinf main bhi likhti hun..:)