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  • Thahraa huaa manzar hai k maatam hai nazar kaa...merii ek puraanii Ghazal

    1.
    ik mauj-e-balaa_khez samandar se uThii hai
    saahil pe vohi chiiz jo paanii meN dabii hai

    2.
    mehtaab kii kirnoN se sadaa phooT ke niklii
    ghabra ke uThaa huN ki zamiiN TuuT rahii hai

    3.
    sab kuchh hai usii tarHa, vohii faasle kal ke
    ma'luum nahiiN aaj bhi kia ham meN kamii hai

    4.
    uRtaa hua guzra huN sar-e-jaada-e-asraar
    ik khowaab kii duNyaa meN mirii aaNkh khulii hai

    5.
    dekha jo bulaNdi se to manzil ka dhuaaN tha
    chaTTaan se utraa huN to diivaar khaRii hai

    6.
    Thahraa huaa manzar hai k maatam hai nazar ka
    jo 'aks hai aaNkhoN meN jali haii na khafii hai

    7.
    maazii ne teh-e-khaak kiya hai tujhe, "Sheroo!"
    takhtii jo tire 'ahd kii marqad pe lagii hai

    Fall view from inside my car
    near my work place :)

  • #2
    Re: Thahraa huaa manzar hai k maatam hai nazar kaa...merii ek puraanii Ghazal

    Bahot khoob janab achha likha hai aap ne
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    • #3
      Re: Thahraa huaa manzar hai k maatam hai nazar kaa...merii ek puraanii Ghazal

      Originally posted by WASI ANJUM View Post
      Bahot khoob janab achha likha hai aap ne
      aapkaa be_Had shukria k aapne is banda e naa_cheez kii adnaa sii kaavish ko saraahaa aur apen ta'assuraat se navaazaa...thankoo :rose

      Fall view from inside my car
      near my work place :)

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      • #4
        Re: Thahraa huaa manzar hai k maatam hai nazar kaa...merii ek puraanii Ghazal

        keep writing and keep sharing with us:thmbup:
        It was really a good read :rose
        " Obstacles are what you see when you take your eyes off your goals "

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        • #5
          Re: Thahraa huaa manzar hai k maatam hai nazar kaa...merii ek puraanii Ghazal

          Originally posted by Xenja View Post
          keep writing and keep sharing with us:thmbup:
          It was really a good read :rose
          thank you so much indeed...i'm elated by ur kind words of appreciation and encouragement :)

          Fall view from inside my car
          near my work place :)

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          • #6
            Re: Thahraa huaa manzar hai k maatam hai nazar kaa...merii ek puraanii Ghazal

            Originally posted by SherAli View Post
            1.
            ik mauj-e-balaa_khez samandar se uThii hai
            saahil pe vohi chiiz jo paanii meN dabii hai

            2.
            mehtaab kii kirnoN se sadaa phooT ke niklii
            ghabra ke uThaa huN ki zamiiN TuuT rahii hai

            3.
            sab kuchh hai usii tarHa, vohii faasle kal ke
            ma'luum nahiiN aaj bhi kia ham meN kamii hai

            4.
            uRtaa hua guzra huN sar-e-jaada-e-asraar
            ik khowaab kii duNyaa meN mirii aaNkh khulii hai

            5.
            dekha jo bulaNdi se to manzil ka dhuaaN tha
            chaTTaan se utraa huN to diivaar khaRii hai

            6.
            Thahraa huaa manzar hai k maatam hai nazar ka
            jo 'aks hai aaNkhoN meN jali haii na khafii hai

            7.
            maazii ne teh-e-khaak kiya hai tujhe, "Sheroo!"
            takhtii jo tire 'ahd kii marqad pe lagii hai
            beautiful sharing...................
            :alhamd::SubhanAllhaa::alhamd::jazak::insha:

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            • #7
              Re: Thahraa huaa manzar hai k maatam hai nazar kaa...merii ek puraanii Ghazal

              i ve nothing to say BUT it is FANTASTIC

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              • #8
                Re: Thahraa huaa manzar hai k maatam hai nazar kaa...merii ek puraanii Ghazal

                Originally posted by nazar hussain naz View Post
                i ve nothing to say BUT it is FANTASTIC
                aapkaa beHad mamnoon aur mutashakkir huN k aapne merii adnaa sii kaavish ko saraahaa aur pane besh bahaa ta'assuraat bhi ba-ham pahoNchaaye. :rose

                Fall view from inside my car
                near my work place :)

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