magar bad-qismatii se huN akelaa, haaye! bechaaraa...mere do band

[SherAli]

salaam dosto ayr dostanyo! :)

ummeed ahi k mizaaj-e-giraamii baKahir hoNge :)

do abnd le kar Haazir-e-Khidmat huaa huN, mulaaHizah farmaaiye aur apnii aaraaz se navaaziye...shiddat se intizaar rahegaa :) shukria :)

_______Sheroo :)

1.
merii jaaN bholaa bhaalaa, zulm Dhaanaa yuN nahiiN achchhaa
adaa se vaar karnaa aur rulaanaa, yuN nahiiN achchhaa
jahaan-e-'ishq meN bijlii giraanaa, yuN nahiiN achchhaa
mere saaqii! piyaase ko lubhaanaa, yuN nahiiN achchhaa

phalaa, phoolaa shabaab aayaa Hobaab-e-zindagaanii meN
magar bachpan kaa ab-tak daur hai baaqii jawaanii meN

2.
base haiN saiNkaRoN 'aalam mire har samt, mah-paaraa
haNsii uThtii hai ab chaaroN taraf, mere sitam_aaraa
jawaanii josh par aatii hai auroN ke liyee paaraa
magar bad-qismatii se huN akelaa, haaye! bec-chaaraa

moHabbat meN faqeerii jhoNpRii firdaus-e-'aalaa hai
magar bad-baKht dunyaa ke HisaaroN meN akelaa hai

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: magar bad-qismatii se huN akelaa, haaye! bechaaraa...mere do band

Bahot khoob janab achha likha hai

[SherAli]

Re: magar bad-qismatii se huN akelaa, haaye! bechaaraa...mere do band

Bahot khoob janab achha likha hai

kalaam kii pasandeedgii ke liye shukria aapkaa bahot bahot janaab e anjum saab :rose

[Mahvish Waqas]

Re: magar bad-qismatii se huN akelaa, haaye! bechaaraa...mere do band

Assalam O Alaikum...
Zabardast Janab Bohat Hi Khub Likha Hai...liktay Rahain Aur Share Kartay Rahain Kion Kay Apnay Khaylat O Jazbat Ko Lafzoon Main Perona Her Aik Ki Bas Ki Baat Nahi Hai :)

Shukria....
Apna Khayal Rakhya Ga...
Aur Duaoon Main Yaad...
Dua Go...
Mehwish Afsar

[SherAli]

Re: magar bad-qismatii se huN akelaa, haaye! bechaaraa...mere do band

Assalam O Alaikum...
Zabardast Janab Bohat Hi Khub Likha Hai...liktay Rahain Aur Share Kartay Rahain Kion Kay Apnay Khaylat O Jazbat Ko Lafzoon Main Perona Her Aik Ki Bas Ki Baat Nahi Hai :)

Shukria....
Apna Khayal Rakhya Ga...
Aur Duaoon Main Yaad...
Dua Go...
Mehwish Afsar

moHtaramah Mahvish saaHiba,
assalaamo 'alaikum,

zahe 'izzo sharf k aap ne is naa_cheez kii tuk-bandii par na sirf nazar Daali bal k apne besh-bahaa ta'sssurata se bhii navaaza. aapke chand kalimaat e daad o atHseen mere liye mash'il-e-raah haiN. wallah, yaqeen ajaniye, aap jaisi suKhan shinaas aur baa-kamaal shaa'ira kii pazeeraaii qaabil-e-sad hazaar Khushii o faKhr hai. shukria :)

faqat Khaak_nashiin,
_______Sheroo :)

[MuQadas]

Re: magar bad-qismatii se huN akelaa, haaye! bechaaraa...mere do band

walikum salam



moHabbat meN faqeerii jhoNpRii firdaus-e-'aalaa hai
magar bad-baKht dunyaa ke HisaaroN meN akelaa hai

wah bohat khoob zabar10

[rehman]

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nice shaing

[SherAli]

Re: magar bad-qismatii se huN akelaa, haaye! bechaaraa...mere do band

nice shaing

thank you Bro :)

[SherAli]

Re: magar bad-qismatii se huN akelaa, haaye! bechaaraa...mere do band

walikum salam



moHabbat meN faqeerii jhoNpRii firdaus-e-'aalaa hai
magar bad-baKht dunyaa ke HisaaroN meN akelaa hai

wah bohat khoob zabar10

kalaam ke pasandeedgii ek liye aapkaa bahot bahot shukria, Moqaddas aur she'r kii nishaan-dehii ke liye mamnoon huN :)