merii ek aur Ghazal...log milte haiN, bhulaa dete haiN

[SherAli]

salaam 'alaikum

ek aur Ghazal le kar Haazir-e-Khidmat huaa huN. umemed hai k baar-e-giraaN na guzregii. aapkii aaraa kaa shiddat se intizaar rahegaa bhale hii vo tanqeed ho yaa tanqees :)

shukria

_______Sheroo

1.
log milte haiN, bhulaa dete haiN
kaisii be-naam sazaa dete haiN

2.
aaNkh bhar aayii hai fasl-e-gul meN
phuul khilte haiN, rulaa dete haiN

3.
naama be-naam sahii, uske Huroof
terii Khushboo kaa pataa dete haiN

4.
kia kisii se kaheN roodaad-e-Hayaat
log baatoN ko havaa dete haiN

5.
mujh se milte haiN to ashkoN kaa lahoo
muskuraahaT meN milaa dete haiN

6.
kitne anjaan haiN arbaab-e-jafaa
zehr maaNgeN to davaa dete haiN

7.
phool mahke haiN Ghazal meN, "Sheroo!"
zaKhm alfaaz sajaa dete haiN

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: merii ek aur Ghazal...log milte haiN, bhulaa dete haiN

Bahot khoob janab bahot khoobsurat Gazal likhi hai aap ne

[*Hala*]

Re: merii ek aur Ghazal...log milte haiN, bhulaa dete haiN

w.salam
buht khoobsurat shero bro... lekhti rahi .. khush rahein

[SherAli]

Re: merii ek aur Ghazal...log milte haiN, bhulaa dete haiN

Bahot khoob janab bahot khoobsurat Gazal likhi hai aap ne

wasim sahib aapkaa maiN teh-e-dil se mutashakkir huN k aapne merii kaavish na sirf pasand farmaayii bal k apne besh-bahaa auqaat meN se chand lamHe churaa kar merii Hausalah-afzaaii farmaayii. :)

[SherAli]

Re: merii ek aur Ghazal...log milte haiN, bhulaa dete haiN

w.salam
buht khoobsurat shero bro... lekhti rahi .. khush rahein

shukran hamsheera Haala saaHiba :). aapkii Hausalah afzaaii nihaayat aham hai mere liye. shukria ek baar phir se aapkaa :)

[saraah]

Re: merii ek aur Ghazal...log milte haiN, bhulaa dete haiN

salaam 'alaikum

ek aur Ghazal le kar Haazir-e-Khidmat huaa huN. umemed hai k baar-e-giraaN na guzregii. aapkii aaraa kaa shiddat se intizaar rahegaa bhale hii vo tanqeed ho yaa tanqees :)

shukria

_______Sheroo

1.
log milte haiN, bhulaa dete haiN
kaisii be-naam sazaa dete haiN

2.
aaNkh bhar aayii hai fasl-e-gul meN
phuul khilte haiN, rulaa dete haiN

3.
naama be-naam sahii, uske Huroof
terii Khushboo kaa pataa dete haiN

4.
kia kisii se kaheN roodaad-e-Hayaat
log baatoN ko havaa dete haiN

5.
mujh se milte haiN to ashkoN kaa lahoo
muskuraahaT meN milaa dete haiN

6.
kitne anjaan haiN arbaab-e-jafaa
zehr maaNgeN to davaa dete haiN

7.
phool mahke haiN Ghazal meN, "Sheroo!"
zaKhm alfaaz sajaa dete haiN

sher ali.....muje koi khaas know how nae han shairy k baaray iss liye koi tanqeed baraye islaah nae krskoon gi.....haan muje andaz yeh kisi shaair ka mehsoos horaha hai....:khi:....last 3 shairs achay lagay.:thmbup:

[rehman]

Re: merii ek aur Ghazal...log milte haiN, bhulaa dete haiN

nice sharing ...................

[SherAli]

Re: merii ek aur Ghazal...log milte haiN, bhulaa dete haiN

sher ali.....muje koi khaas know how nae han shairy k baaray iss liye koi tanqeed baraye islaah nae krskoon gi.....haan muje andaz yeh kisi shaair ka mehsoos horaha hai....:khi:....last 3 shairs achay lagay.:thmbup:

hayeN? Khjaala aap shaa'ira nahiiN maiN :o maiN to u ko "Ghaliba" samajhtaa thaa...chaleN koi baat nahiiN...Ghaliba bhi ban jaayeNgii nasr nigaarii meN :)

pasandeedgii ke liye maiN u kaa mamnoon huN :)

[SherAli]

Re: merii ek aur Ghazal...log milte haiN, bhulaa dete haiN

nice sharing ...................

thank you bhai mere :)

[Z.]

Re: merii ek aur Ghazal...log milte haiN, bhulaa dete haiN

kia kisii se kaheN roodaad-e-Hayaat
log baatoN ko havaa dete haiN

nicely written :thmbup:

[Soulmate]

Re: merii ek aur Ghazal...log milte haiN, bhulaa dete haiN

nice sharing

[saraah]

Re: merii ek aur Ghazal...log milte haiN, bhulaa dete haiN

hayeN? Khjaala aap shaa'ira nahiiN maiN :o maiN to u ko "Ghaliba" samajhtaa thaa...chaleN koi baat nahiiN...Ghaliba bhi ban jaayeNgii nasr nigaarii meN :)

pasandeedgii ke liye maiN u kaa mamnoon huN :)

haaayeeen?
tum aur kiya kiya smjhtay ho sher ali..abi bata do taa k me tumhari tassali krwaoon zra.....

[SherAli]

Re: merii ek aur Ghazal...log milte haiN, bhulaa dete haiN

haaayeeen?
tum aur kiya kiya smjhtay ho sher ali..abi bata do taa k me tumhari tassali krwaoon zra.....

chhoTii Khaala aisii koi baat nahiiN hai...:) u r a great member...me kii Khaala jo ho hehehe...me kii baat par dhyaan na diyaa kareN...me kii baat aur gadhe kii laat kaa koii bharosa nahiiN ;) hehehe

[*khushi*]

Re: merii ek aur Ghazal...log milte haiN, bhulaa dete haiN

Walikumsalam

kia kisii se kaheN roodaad-e-Hayaat
log baatoN ko havaa dete haiN

Bht khoob...:thmbup:

[SherAli]

Re: merii ek aur Ghazal...log milte haiN, bhulaa dete haiN

nicely written :thmbup:

tahnk you so very much Xenja Ji :)