Yaad A Gaye

[WOH LARKI]

Asslam o Allakum WR WB, aik taza treen kawish k sath hazir hoon,apni tanqeedi ya tameeri raye se zaroor nawaaziye ga.:rose



Mazi mein jhaanka to kuch zakhm puranay yaad aa gaye
zabt rakh boht mugar,ronay k bahanay yaad aa gaye

tarrap uthi hoon beetay huye waqt ko soch ker
dukh mein guzray jo wo saray zamanay yaad aa gaye

woh behti nadi, dhalti shaam aur aik doraaha
bichhrray thay jahan hum wo thikanay yaad aa gaye

shiddat e gham se huye dil o jaan ghaayel jub
teray lafzon k teer aur nishanay yaad aa gaye

aish prasti se baigaana jahan se se uth gaye
wo ishrat kadah e ishq k deewanay yaad aa gaye


By Muskan

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: Yaad A Gaye

Asslam-o-Alikum WR WB

Wah ! bhot umda Muskan Ji .. really bhot umda . aik aik shair apnay ander hi bnasa hau hay asa lag rha hay jasy aap ny dil ki baat meri kha di ho ... Allah pak aap ko hamesha khsuya ata kary aur hamesha aap isi trha Pagham ky liya likhti rahay Ameen

FeaamNAllah

Shidat Ghums ey hui dil -o-jaan ghyal jab
teyr lafzo ky teer aur neshany yaad aagy

Bhot umda

[WOH LARKI]

Re: Yaad A Gaye

Boht Shukriya jo itnay ghaur se perhtay hein apna qeemati waqt sarf ker k.:)

[Yaaram]

Re: Yaad A Gaye

Hamesha ki tarah bohat umdah...kamal....akhri share bohat acha laga.umdah hay

[WOH LARKI]

Re: Yaad A Gaye

Hamesha ki tarah bohat umdah...kamal....akhri share bohat acha laga.umdah hay

WelCome Back Yaaram:rose :rose :rose :rose .

pasandeedagi k liye shukriyaaaa.:)

[khurram_shaikh]

Re: Yaad A Gaye

Assalaam o alekum,


waaah bahooot khoob muskan aapki adna si kooshish pasand aayi hameshaa ki tareh aapki yeh kavish bhi waisi hi hai zabardast likha hai aapnien Dili Daad Qabool karien khush rahien

[WOH LARKI]

Re: Yaad A Gaye

Khurram aap ka bhi humesha ki trah shukriya ada kerti hoon k aap itnay zabt se bardasht kertay hein meray likhay ko. :)

[shahid_naman]

Re: Yaad A Gaye

Asslam o Allakum WR WB, aik taza treen kawish k sath hazir hoon,apni tanqeedi ya tameeri raye se zaroor nawaaziye ga.:rose



Mazi mein jhaanka to kuch zakhm puranay yaad aa gaye
zabt rakh boht mugar,ronay k bahanay yaad aa gaye

tarrap uthi hoon beetay huye waqt ko soch ker
dukh mein guzray jo wo saray zamanay yaad aa gaye

woh behti nadi, dhalti shaam aur aik doraaha
bichhrray thay jahan hum wo thikanay yaad aa gaye

shiddat e gham se huye dil o jaan ghaayel jub
teray lafzon k teer aur nishanay yaad aa gaye

aish prasti se baigaana jahan se se uth gaye
wo ishrat kadah e ishq k deewanay yaad aa gaye


By Muskan

wha bahot acha....:phool::phool: