Mujhay Khuaabo'n Say Shikaayat Hay

[hayaa_n]

Asslmaoalikum :rose

[WOH LARKI]

Re: Mujhay Khuaabo'n Say Shikaayat Hay

Mujhay apno'n say shikaayat hay
Kiyu'n apna bann kay dikhaatay thay
Kiyu'n jhoota haq woh jatatay thay
Mai'n saaray haq day daiti thi
Aur khud ko un'ka samajhti thi
Apno'n nay moo'n jo mowr liya
Mai'n nay bhi un'ko chowr diya...


Haya ji saray ka kalaam apni misal aap hey, aap nihayet hi khoobsurati aur sadagi k sath haqeeqat ko lafzon k saanchay mein dhaal deti hein..........bohat pasand aaya aap ka kalaam. khas ker ooper ki chandd lainein to kamaal ki hein........thanx 4 sharing:khi: :rose :rose

[hayaa_n]

Re: Mujhay Khuaabo'n Say Shikaayat Hay

Muskan ji.itnay umda reply ko read kar kay dil khush ho'gaya.bouhat shukriya itnay nice reply ka.:jazak: :)

[khurram_shaikh]

Re: Mujhay Khuaabo'n Say Shikaayat Hay

Assalaam o alekum,


waaaah kyaa kehnien zabardast halqe phulqe alfaazoon mien peeroyi huee aapki yeh kavish waaqaee dil ko chhuutii huee ghuzer gayi khaas taur per yeh qitta bass farq sirf itnaa hai ke aapnien un rishtoon se munh moor liyaa aur mujhse munh mooraa jaataa nahin :)

Mujhay rishto'n say shikaayat hay
Kiyu'n mujh say rishtay jatatay thay
Aur jhootay naatay banaatay thay
Mai'n rishto'n mai'n kho jaati thi
Aur dil say apna banaati thi
Rishto'n nay moo'n jo mowr liya
Mai'n nay bhi un'ko chowr diya

bahoot khoob dili daad qabool karien khush rahien

[hayaa_n]

Re: Mujhay Khuaabo'n Say Shikaayat Hay

W.salaam
Khurram ji main nay sirf Shaairi ki hadd tak hi choura hay aur moo'n moura hay k yeh mumkin nahi mairay liye....yeh sab bas feelings hai'n aur kuch nahi sab kuch hi takhayyulaati hay :lol ....mujhay to shikaayat tak say shikaayat nahi :lol
Aap ka bouhat umda reply hay jis ko read kar k mujhay bouhat achcha laga.:jazak: :)

[Rabi]

Re: Mujhay Khuaabo'n Say Shikaayat Hay

wah kiya khoob likha hayaa app nay bohay umda thanxs for shairing:)

[hayaa_n]

Re: Mujhay Khuaabo'n Say Shikaayat Hay

:jazak: Rabi ji khushi hui kay aap ko yeh nazm pasand aai.bouhat shukriya.:)

[Yaaram]

Re: Mujhay Khuaabo'n Say Shikaayat Hay

Mujhey KHuwaboN se shikayat hay......khuwab sache nahi hote .......han insaan jagtey main khuwab na dekhe to......aur na hi khuwab zindgee ban sakte hain.....to in se shikayat kesi?
Anyway Bohat kamal ka likha hay pasand aaya.....:)

[hayaa_n]

Re: Mujhay Khuaabo'n Say Shikaayat Hay

:jazak: Yaaram ji kay aap nay is ko urdu mai'n compose kiya.Maira likha huwa sab aap hi urdu main compose kar rahay hain jis k liye dil say shukar guzaar hu'n.Khush rahiye sadaa.Aameen:)
Yaaram ji mujhay to Shikayat say bhi shikayat nahi:) yeh bas shairi ki hadd tah ki hay.kisi say zara gila nahi.:lol hehehehe aur maira likha koi parhta hi kahaan hay na time hay k koi bhi is likhay huway par aik nazar bhi daalay is liye bay fikar ho kay likhti hu'n.:)

Yeh to izhar-e-khayalaat ka tareeqa hay
Loge kaihtay hain shaairi jis ko

[Rabi]

Re: Mujhay Khuaabo'n Say Shikaayat Hay

mughy dubara say bohat achi lagi aik bar phir peherti hun

[hayaa_n]

Re: Mujhay Khuaabo'n Say Shikaayat Hay

:jazak: :) Rabi bouhat khushi hui k aap ko nazm pasand aai.bouhat khush rahiye.Aameen:)

[Hassan]

Re: Mujhay Khuaabo'n Say Shikaayat Hay

Mazaaa aa agya read kr kay
HSN

[hayaa_n]

Re: Mujhay Khuaabo'n Say Shikaayat Hay

Mazaaa aa agya read kr kay
HSN

:jazak: :) HSN ji aap ki howsla afzai ka bouhat bouhat shukriya..

[Z.]

Re: Mujhay Khuaabo'n Say Shikaayat Hay

Haya bohot payara likha hai :rose aik aik lafz :thmbup:

khush raho jahan bhi raho :rose