Taqdeer

[bashirmanzar]

Tum Ne Kaha Tha Barish Tum Ko Achi Lagti Hai
Main Ne Sawan Kar Dala
Apni Ankhoun Ko
Aur Phir Tumhain
Dhoop Achi Lagne Lage

[bashirmanzar]

Re: Taqdeer

I have been writting little bit. Don't know whether it is poetry or not.

[Hassan]

Re: Taqdeer

yar ye tu agr tumhry hi ilfaz hain tu mujhy itny achay lgay hain kay main bayan naihn kr sekta..or nazam chotti likhi hy tu zayda achhi lagti hy....lambi ghazl tu prhi ja sekti hay lakin nazam odhori reh jari hay....isi size ki or asy hi khoobsorat ilfazoo kay sath main or dosry urdulover tumhin welcome kehty hain....or hamain isi trh ki chotti chotti c nazamy zror sunana..
khush rahoo
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