Sheeshay C Chahat!

[Shahdil]

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[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Sheeshay C Chahat!

Waah bahot khoob janab bahot khoobsurat ghazal likhi hai aap ne
khush Rahen

[Shahdil]

Re: Sheeshay C Chahat!

Waah bahot khoob janab bahot khoobsurat ghazal likhi hai aap ne
khush Rahen

:thankzu::thankzu:....For Appreciating

[Faaz]

Re: Sheeshay C Chahat!

Sheeshey ke dil ko sheeshey se chahat main kia khoob badla:clap:

[fazal khan]

Re: Sheeshay C Chahat!

Wah Ji Zabardast,,,,:clap:,,,,,,,

[Shahdil]

Re: Sheeshay C Chahat!

Sheeshey ke dil ko sheeshey se chahat main kia khoob badla:clap:

:thankzu:.......For Appreciating

Wah Ji Zabardast,,,,:clap:,,,,,,,

:thankzu: For Appreciating Fazal Khan

[*Hala*]

Re: Sheeshay C Chahat!

ha!! app be MASHALLAH achi shairy karty ho..
khush rahein

[Shahdil]

Re: Sheeshay C Chahat!

ha!! app be MASHALLAH achi shairy karty ho..
khush rahein

:aameen:
..........Aap Bhee Sadaa Khush Rahein...:aameen:

[Lonelystranger zaheerkhan]

Re: Sheeshay C Chahat!

ha!! app be MASHALLAH achi shairy karty ho..
khush rahein

dair Alaaah zma dair khwakh sho
mehrabani yaara :thmbup:

[Ali jee]

Re: Sheeshay C Chahat!

Sha jee buhat umdha ghazal dad kabool karin .....

[Shahdil]

Re: Sheeshay C Chahat!

Sha jee buhat umdha ghazal dad kabool karin .....

Ali Jee Boht Boht Boht :thankzu:

[shummu]

Re: Sheeshay C Chahat!

salam shahdil...achchi koshish hai magar kahin kahin behr se chook gaye ho...

ye ghazal is behr mein hai..

fa'oolun........fa'oolun.........fa'oolun..... fa'al
1 2 2,1 2 2 ,1 2 2,1 2

us hisaab se dekho to kuch msire khaarij ul behr ho gaye hain...

wahi shaqs mujhse muhabbat kare
wahi shaqs mujhse baGhawat kare

wah..behr mein hai dono misra.:thmbup:

banaaye woh paththar sa mujhko sanam
sheeshe se phir mujhse chaahat kare

khayal achcha hai..doosra misra behr se khaarij ho gaya hai...

hairaaN hun main is qadar dosto!
muhabbat ka devtaa siyaasat kare

yahan bhi dono misra be behr ho gaya hai... 'devtaa' =dev-taa ( 2 2 )nahi hai balki 'de-v-taa' hai yaani 2 1 2

seekhe woh aadaab-e-ulfat kayi
sikhaaye magar phir adawat kare

pehla misra behr mein nahi hai.

be sood ulfat mein dil haar ke
koi kab talaq phir qayaamat kare

pehla misra not in beher.

mere dil mere naa khudaa maan jaa
isse pehle ke koi naseehat kare

dono behr mein nahi hai.

yahi kam naseebi hai mujh pe koi
muhabbat ka munkir hukoomat kare

ye behr mein hai .:)

ummeed hai nazr-e-saani karke poori ghazal ko behr mein likhne ki koshish karoge.All the best :thmbup:

[Gul]

Re: Sheeshay C Chahat!

Nice Job .....Shahdil ..