Tera Saath Agar Nahi Hotaaa

[Ali jee]

Re: Tera Saath Agar Nahi Hotaaa

wah bahut khoob...ghazal bhi aur presentation bhi..daad pesh hai! second last sher bahut pasand aaya...!

RAMZAN MUBARAK!

thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx:rose

[Ali jee]

Re: Tera Saath Agar Nahi Hotaaa

Boht Khoob....:Shandar:....rose

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[Ali jee]

Re: Tera Saath Agar Nahi Hotaaa

wah bhai...
buhat alah
AIk dum jhakkas :)

thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx:rose

[Ali jee]

Re: Tera Saath Agar Nahi Hotaaa

Bohat khobsurat Ghazal
Wah!!

thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx:rose

[fazal khan]

Re: Tera Saath Agar Nahi Hotaaa

:SubhanAllhaa:very nice,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,bahut aala:dance2:

[Ali jee]

Re: Tera Saath Agar Nahi Hotaaa

wah bahut khub

thanx so much .................:rose

[Ali jee]

Re: Tera Saath Agar Nahi Hotaaa

aik dam zabardast

thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx:rose

[Ali jee]

Re: Tera Saath Agar Nahi Hotaaa

wah bhai...
buhat alah
AIk dum jhakkas :)

thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx:rose

[great_pisces]

Re: Tera Saath Agar Nahi Hotaaa

very nice poetry

[kanees]

Re: Tera Saath Agar Nahi Hotaaa

Wow... Bohat hi acchi Gazal hain
Aur jo back ground pic aur frame vo bhi bohat accha hain.

[Pretty_doll]

Re: Tera Saath Agar Nahi Hotaaa

ali jee app ki wo do ghazal kafe jan dar thi ...
as ghazal me mujhy zeyada nahi kuch masron me thori kami mhesos ho he
app ki ghazal ki zameen jan dar hi wazan me bhi takreeb pora hi ...
phir bhi kuch jaha Atko mhesos hoa ... umeed karte hon kami ko door karin gaye ....:phool:
over all good work dad qabool farmin

[comon]

Re: Tera Saath Agar Nahi Hotaaa

very cute .............

[comon]

Re: Tera Saath Agar Nahi Hotaaa

Ali super work and poetry ............

[Ali jee]

Re: Tera Saath Agar Nahi Hotaaa

Bahot khoob Ali bahot achha likha hai aap ne

Achi kaha likhta hon bhai ba kool app kai chore karta hon :khi:

[Ali jee]

Re: Tera Saath Agar Nahi Hotaaa

ali jee app ki wo do ghazal kafe jan dar thi ...
as ghazal me mujhy zeyada nahi kuch masron me thori kami mhesos ho he
app ki ghazal ki zameen jan dar hi wazan me bhi takreeb pora hi ...
phir bhi kuch jaha Atko mhesos hoa ... umeed karte hon kami ko door karin gaye ....:phool:
over all good work dad qabool farmin

thank u sis ........................ jo kame app mhesos karhi hi us ki neshan dhi zaror farmin ..........:)