,,,Aur Barish Hoti Rahi,,,

[Hassan]

naihn Yaad koi mulaqat rahi or barish hoti rahi
sirf tanhai mery sath rahi or barish hoti rahi

syyah badloo nay asmaan ko dhaanp liya tha
aaj din main bhi raat rahi or barish hoti rahi

qetroo ki shakal barad jaoo tery shaher main
ajb khvahish mery hath rahi or barish hoti rahi

bohat aitbar kr ky daykh liya ahbab pr H@$$@N
ab mery liey meri zaat rahi or barish hoti rahi

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[Masood]

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OKAY very nice Hassan Keep it up :)

[Enigmatic]

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naihn Yaad koi mulaqat rahi or barish hoti rahi
sirf tanhai mery sath rahi or barish hoti rahi

syyah badloo nay asmaan ko dhaanp liya tha
aaj din main bhi raat rahi or barish hoti rahi

qetroo ki shakal barad jaoo tery shaher main
ajb khvahish mery hath rahi or barish hoti rahi

bohat aitbar kr ky daykh liya ahbab pr H@$$@N
ab mery liey meri zaat rahi or barish hoti rahi

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syyah badloo nay asmaan ko dhaanp liya tha
aaj din main bhi raat rahi or barish hoti rahi

MashAllah Bohot Khoob Hassan ji, keep it up!

[WOH LARKI]

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wowwww

naihn Yaad koi mulaqat rahi or barish hoti rahi
sirf tanhai mery sath rahi or barish hoti rahi

Boht hi khoob Hassan Bhai, but 30ray shair ka pehla misra shayed aap ne miss spell kiya hey na jaldi mein? aaindah dhayan rakhiye ga.ok? yeh kuch yoon ho ga shayed!


Qatron ki shakel baras jaoon teray shehr mein

ager yeh bhi sahii nhi hey to please aap khud taseeh ker dijiye, nawazish ho gi.:)

[Hassan]

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Walikum slaam
Muskan ji aap nay bohat gehri nzroo sy mare ghazl read ki. aapka bohat shukrya ...or aap nay sahi kaha hay kay mujh sy speelings theek naihn likhy gaey they.aapka ye sab batnay ka bohat bohat shukrya..or ainda sy main ahtyat kroo ga.:jazak:
khush rehyey or ghaltyoo sy agah krty reheay.
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[Muhammad Khalil]

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abi tak barish hu rahi hay kia???

[Muhammad Khalil]

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abi tak barish hu rahi hay kia???:cc: :cc:

[SAGARKHAN]

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KHOOBSORAT:rose

[Kainat]

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V Nice Poem :)

[Shaim]

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Buhat pyaari poem hai
keep it up!

['SamRazi']

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buhut acha andaz hai aur kalam bhi :)


share kerne ka shukriya, khush raho :rose