dil tor dena jesay koi baat hi nahin hay

[Aania]

ye aur baat unhain fursat hi nahen
aie mere dil yun na toot jaya ker..

kiun tarsatay ho un kay liye
unki nazron main teri koi wuq-at hi nahin

anjanay main labon pay agai yeh baat
warna tou humai shikwon ki adat hi nahin

umr guzar dee teri chahat main is tarah
jesay barrh ke tujh say koi ibadat hi nahin

ab ban k naadan bethay hain wo yun
dil tor dena jesay koi baat hi nahin hay ...!!

by me [A]

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: dil tor dena jesay koi baat hi nahin hay

ary wow aania kia khoob likha hay



umr guzar dee teri chahat main is tarah
jesay barrh ke tujh say koi ibadat hi nahin

[جنیداختر]

Re: dil tor dena jesay koi baat hi nahin hay

ye aur baat unhain fursat hi nahen
aie mere dil yun na toot jaya ker..

kiun tarsatay ho un kay liye
unki nazron main teri koi wuq-at hi nahin

anjanay main labon pay agai yeh baat
warna tou humai shikwon ki adat hi nahin

umr guzar dee teri chahat main is tarah
jesay barrh ke tujh say koi ibadat hi nahin

ab ban k naadan bethay hain wo yun
dil tor dena jesay koi baat hi nahin hay ...!!

by me [A]

wow achi shairy kar laiti hai aap

[Masood]

Re: dil tor dena jesay koi baat hi nahin hay

Zabardast :rose bohat achha aur bar'waqt likha hai aani - bohat pasand aaya :) khush raho aur aisey hi likhti raho :)

[Hassan]

Re: dil tor dena jesay koi baat hi nahin hay

hmmm achay ilfaz chunny hain .
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[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: dil tor dena jesay koi baat hi nahin hay

anjanay main labon pay agai yeh baat
warna tou humai shikwon ki adat hi nahin

umr guzar dee teri chahat main is tarah
jesay barrh ke tujh say koi ibadat hi nahin

Bohat umda likha he Aania, pasand aaya...kaash mein bhi is tarah likh sakta :-s

weldone aany, keep it up dear

[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: dil tor dena jesay koi baat hi nahin hay

anjanay main labon pay agai yeh baat
warna tou humai shikwon ki adat hi nahin

umr guzar dee teri chahat main is tarah
jesay barrh ke tujh say koi ibadat hi nahin

really very touching aania...keep it up

[amber]

Re: dil tor dena jesay koi baat hi nahin hay

nice poetry Aania

[WOH LARKI]

Re: dil tor dena jesay koi baat hi nahin hay

umr guzar dee teri chahat main is tarah
jesay barrh ke tujh say koi ibadat hi nahin


boht khhob Aania, aap bhi ahesta ahesta khul ker samnay a rahi hein, very nice sharing, thanx..........aap ki traf se mazeed kawishon ka intezar rahay ga.

[Aania]

Re: dil tor dena jesay koi baat hi nahin hay

thnx everybody........... ......bas kabhi kabhi.....kuch na kuch likha hi jata hai....
thnx all of u to appreciate ma words............. :hug:

[Shaim]

Re: dil tor dena jesay koi baat hi nahin hay

buhaat aacchi hai Aaina sis!:)

[Aania]

Re: dil tor dena jesay koi baat hi nahin hay

buhaat aacchi hai Aaina sis!:)

thnx barish... my name is AANIA :tauba

[Aania]

Re: dil tor dena jesay koi baat hi nahin hay

umr guzar dee teri chahat main is tarah
jesay barrh ke tujh say koi ibadat hi nahin


boht khhob Aania, aap bhi ahesta ahesta khul ker samnay a rahi hein, very nice sharing, thanx..........aap ki traf se mazeed kawishon ka intezar rahay ga.

thnx Muskaan :rose

[rehman]

Re: dil tor dena jesay koi baat hi nahin hay

wonderful aania jee

[Hassan]

Re: dil tor dena jesay koi baat hi nahin hay

ary ary Hasseb tum apni poetry yaha likh rehy ho yar km loog itni achi por\erty prhy gay
naya thread use krro
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