yaad

[WOH LARKI]

Aik purani ghazal jo aaj share ker rhi hoon, apni qeemati raye se nwaziye ga.:rose


Teri yaad ne rakha man aangan mein qadam
machalnay lagay phir dil k armaan meray
phir chhoo gaya teray qurb ka ahsaas mujhey
khushboo se banay hein jism o jaan meray
shayed tu rasta bhool parray meray ghar ka
mehw e intezar hein dil o jaan meray
abr e muhabbat hi nah barsa, meray shehr mein warna
weeranay yeh ban jatay, gulistaan meray
tujhey pa ker kho diya, yeh zabt nhi mera?
aur kia kia lo gay tum imtehaan meray!
jub nah samjha wo lafzon ki zubaan kabhi
zakhm dil k ban gaye tarjumaan meray
chiragh e lahu se ghar mein roshni ker loon
aao kisi shab ban k mehmaan meray



By Muskan

[khurram_shaikh]

Re: yaad

Assalaam o alekum,


waaah bahooot khoob bahoot umdeh aur zabardast kavish likhi aapnien muskan her sher lajawaab aur dil ko chhutaa hai dili daad qabol karien khush rahien aur aayinda bhi humse share kerti rahien

[WOH LARKI]

Re: yaad

Assalaam o alekum,


waaah bahooot khoob bahoot umdeh aur zabardast kavish likhi aapnien muskan her sher lajawaab aur dil ko chhutaa hai dili daad qabol karien khush rahien aur aayinda bhi humse share kerti rahien

Khurram Bhai mein janti hoon yehan per meray sub se barray FAN aap hi hein:) , mera matlab hey bardasht kernay walaon mein sub se aagay hein, aur koi to iss traf aata bhi nhi hey.:(

Aap ki pasand aur waqt denay k liye be hadd shukriya.:rose

[khan]

Re: yaad

AOA,

Lo:tauba khurram bahi he nain hum b hain:) sachi baat hai bohat khoob likha hai aap nain bohat daad qabool karain bohat khush rahain.


Sohail Abbasi.

[WOH LARKI]

Re: yaad

AOA,

Lo:tauba khurram bahi he nain hum b hain:) sachi baat hai bohat khoob likha hai aap nain bohat daad qabool karain bohat khush rahain.


Sohail Abbasi.

:welcome: Sohail Bhai, daad hum ne qabool ki, badlay mein ap SHUKRIYA qabool kijiye. aur yeh :rose aur :dua bhi, humesha khush rahein.

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: yaad

Assalm-o_Alikum WRW B

aap ka Fan hazir hy ...... :) aik aik shair apnay ander bhot khubi rakhta hy .... bhot umda .. per mujhy jo shair pasnd ay wo main bata ta hu ...

Tujhjy Paa kar kho diya ya zabt nhi mera
aur kya kay lo gy tum imthaan mery !

is shair main kitna kuch aap kha gy ho na.... ! bhot umda
aur is kay baat 2no last kay ..... bnhot umda bahtreen

Allah apk aap ko aur himat aura ap kay zhan ko aur taqat dey

Am,en

FeaamNAlalh

[WOH LARKI]

Re: yaad

Assalm-o_Alikum WRW B

aap ka Fan hazir hy ...... :) aik aik shair apnay ander bhot khubi rakhta hy .... bhot umda .. per mujhy jo shair pasnd ay wo main bata ta hu ...

Tujhjy Paa kar kho diya ya zabt nhi mera
aur kya kay lo gy tum imthaan mery !

is shair main kitna kuch aap kha gy ho na.... ! bhot umda
aur is kay baat 2no last kay ..... bnhot umda bahtreen

Allah apk aap ko aur himat aura ap kay zhan ko aur taqat dey

Am,en

FeaamNAlalh

Mein ne to koi FAN order nhi kiya tha:lol (just a joke,:thmbup: ?)

shairon mein zindagi aur rishton se khaloos k silay mein milnay wali daulat hey.....
Ap ne parha aur pasand kiya, aap ka boht Shukriya BP:rose :rose :rose

[SAGARKHAN]

Re: yaad

bohut khoobsoorat:rose

[Fatima Asad]

Re: yaad

Aik purani ghazal jo aaj share ker rhi hoon, apni qeemati raye se nwaziye ga.:rose

aslaam_u_alikam

bohat hi khub muskan ji

[Masood]

Re: yaad

shayid tu rastah bhool parey mein ghar ka
mehw-e-intizaar hain dil-o-jaan merey

bohat khoob Muskan!

Kaisi ajeeb baat hai keh insaan kisi ka muntazir rehta hai magar musafir apna rasta badal jatey hain. Koi khushiyon ki talash mein, sakoon ki talaash mein nikal kharra hota hai aur koi abdi neend ki talaash mein mehw-e-intizaar rehney lagtey hain.

[WOH LARKI]

Re: yaad

shayid tu rastah bhool parey mein ghar ka
mehw-e-intizaar hain dil-o-jaan merey

bohat khoob Muskan!

Kaisi ajeeb baat hai keh insaan kisi ka muntazir rehta hai magar musafir apna rasta badal jatey hain. Koi khushiyon ki talash mein, sakoon ki talaash mein nikal kharra hota hai aur koi abdi neend ki talaash mein mehw-e-intizaar rehney lagtey hain.

hnm Masood aap ka shukriya reply kernay k liye:rose .................

masood kabhi kabhi musafir apna rasta nhi badaltay zindagi rasta badal leti hey, waqt rasta badal leta hey.....
Aur abdi neend ka intezar wo log kertay hein jin ko yaqeen ho k unhon ne apni aakhrat sanwarnay k liye kafi kuch jamah ker liya hey,hum jaisay gunahgaar log aisa sochtay huye achay nhi lagtay.:fuming:

[Hassan]

Re: yaad

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

[WOH LARKI]

Re: yaad

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

S.K.KH........Kia soch rhay hein itna gehra???????:eye:

[hayaa_n]

Re: yaad

chiragh e lahu se ghar mein roshni ker loon
aao kisi shab ban k mehmaan meray

Muskan ji bouhat khoob.:)

[Brijinder]

Re: yaad

Keep it up,Muskan.As asked u earlier,have u read Shiv batalvi in punjabi?Do read him.You will treasure him.
Brijinder