Tanha Musafar ki shairi

[T@nh@ Mus@fir]

Aslam o Alikum,

ji Gul ji shayed aap ney read kiya hoga. coz main aik or site ka bhi member hon. ok main yahan apni aik bongi see ghazal share karta hon aap k sath. i know aapko achi tu nahi lagey gi. lakin abhi main seekh raha hon na. tu aisa he likha jaata hai. hehehehe

Main Muhabat ko apni Khata likh raha hon
Han shidat ko apni sazaa likh raha hon

Khudhi ko jala raha hon Main aatish-e-karab main tanha
Dard-e-samander ko apney gehraa likh raha hon

Jaata he nahi meri aankh se barsaat ka mu'osam
Mu'asam-e-Ghum ko apney thehraa likh raha hon

piyas he piyaas bheri hai zaat mein mere
Main kismat ko apni Sehraa likh raha hon

ik pal k liye mujhe apni soch ka mehwar kar dey
apni Hasraton ki tujhse iltajaa likh raha hon

kia karon aisa k ho Misel "MARIYAM" ki Gawahi
Main aanso'on ko apney Koyalaa likh raha hon

"USMAN " main SaHiL pey khara hon Jala kar kashtiyan
yea Azayem ki apney itnhaa likh raha hon

Wa ta Izo Mantashaa'a Wa ta Ziloo Mantashaa'aa
apney Muqader ko supurad-e-Khuda likh raha hon

[Gul]

Re: so-e Ghuam kadha hee jaa-tay....aik tarhi gahzal

Buhat Khoobsoorat kalam ....!

KioN mazak kartay hein k aap abhi seekh rahay hein !:)

Masha-Allah ..Buhat khoob likha hai ...!

aap share kartay rahiyay!
alag se thread mein ....ta k sab Mustafeez hooN ...!

[T@nh@ Mus@fir]

Re: so-e Ghuam kadha hee jaa-tay....aik tarhi gahzal

Buhat Khoobsoorat kalam ....!

KioN mazak kartay hein k aap abhi seekh rahay hein !:)

Masha-Allah ..Buhat khoob likha hai ...!

aap share kartay rahiyay!
alag se thread mein ....ta k sab Mustafeez hooN ...!

hehehe thank you so much aap ney mujhe itna encourge kiya or meri Ghazal bhi aapko achi laggi main iss k liye teh dil say mashkoor hon aapka. thank you very much

arey nahi na. main yahin aap k sath share karta hon buss. hehehe sub read karain ge tu mujhe sharam aati hai. hehehehe

[T@nh@ Mus@fir]

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Aslam o Alikum

aaj main aapko apni buhat he personal poem sunaata hon. jo main ney apney Ami jani say mukhaatib ho kar likhi thi. i hope aapko pasand aye gi.

Tanha Musafir

Lambee Musafton ka
Main Musafir hon Tanha
Abhi manzilain door hain
Abhi chalna bhi or hai
Tanha see zindgi ka
Main Tanha Musafir
Meri Musaftain ghatta do
Ya lambee umer ki dua do mujh ko
Ohh "Maan"
Meri rooh thuk gayee hai
Ungliyan phair k
Mere balon main
Goudd main lay k
Sula do mujh ko
Mere seenay main
Ab baraf jum gayee hai
Apnay piyaar main
Lapait lo mujh ko
Mujhe apni aghosh main
Smait lo
Oh "Maan"
Aaj dil say rula do mujh ko

[T@nh@ Mus@fir]

Re: so-e Ghuam kadha hee jaa-tay....aik tarhi gahzal

yea jo ooper main ne apni poem share ki hai na. issi ka part 2 likha tha main ney yea bhi aap k sath share karta hon........ aapko achi lagi na???

Khushiyon ka Musafir

Main khushiyon ka Musafir tha
Main Udasioyon main khho giya
Meri siskion ko samait lo
Mere darad ki bhi kuch dawa karo
apne aanchal ki aaj thandi hawa do Mujh ko
Eay Maan too ney jo sikhaya mujh ko acha bura
main ney aaj tuq bus wahi kiya
kuch log to mujh ko jaan gaye
buhaton ney mujh ko dhoka diya
Meri Mahfilon ko sajja kar
phir mujhko Ruswa kiya
Mujhko Tanha kiya
Main ney sari Duniya ghoom lee
dur dur ki matti bhi choom lee
koi tujh saa na mujh ko mil saka
jis k piyar main itna khaloos ho
Maan mujhe tujh sa na koi mil saka
Main toot giya tha, Main bikhar giya hon
Mujhe smait lo, Mujhe smait lo

[Gul]

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MashaAllah aap k jazbaat buhat achay aur sachay hein
Allah Taalah hamari MaooN ko salamat rakhay ameen ..!

Khush rahiyay ..!

[T@nh@ Mus@fir]

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Ameen

thank you so much Gul ji phir say pasand karney k liye

jeeti rahiye

Gul ji aapko punjabi aati hai???? ager aati hai na tu main ney apney chhotey bhai k liye aik poem likhi thi wo bhi share karon ga. lakin filhaal tu aik Ghazal sunaata hon aapko

[T@nh@ Mus@fir]

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Murjhaon kesey

Jo Beet giya hai Mujh pay wo BAtaon kese
Darad Jo dil ney sahey hain wo Bataon Kese

KEse sunaon meri doobati saanson ki aah-o-pukar
Zakham jo Roh ko miley hain wo dikhaon kesey

Kesey parho gey roti ankhon ki daastan
Behtey ashkon ki zubaan samjhaon kese

Taar zindgi k Saaz dil k toot gaye
Tanha Akeley main Geet khushiyon k gaon kese

Bahaar mujhe phir say lot aney ka kah kar gayee hai
Eay khizaan main khila tha uss k liye ab murjhaon kese

[Gul]

Re: so-e Ghuam kadha hee jaa-tay....aik tarhi gahzal

Ap plz alag se aik .....Thread banaaeiN ta k ziyada loag parh sakein ..
abhi tu yehi lagay gaa k ...jesay u r just replying to my poetry..

aap alag se thread banaein ta k sab loag fez yaab hooN :)

aur jee mujh ko pujnabi samjh aaati hai ..:)
and u r welcome ...!

[T@nh@ Mus@fir]

Re: so-e Ghuam kadha hee jaa-tay....aik tarhi gahzal

lakin kahan banaon mujhe batayain na plz

ok phir main wahan apney bhai k liye jo poem likhi thi na main ney wo share karon ga

wo pakistan main hai. mujhse chhota hai four years. or main yahan itni dooor ussey buhat miss karta hon. mera aik he bhai hai na

[T@nh@ Mus@fir]

Re: Tanha Musafar ki shairi

wow mera bhi section bunn giya.

yupyyyyyyy

thank you very much Aanchal ji

[T@nh@ Mus@fir]

Re: Tanha Musafar ki shairi

Mainoo sochon koolon bacha way veera
mere dil da wairha wasaa way veera

Tere bajon kala'a hoiyan Sunna hoiyan
Mino apney gal naal laa k thand kalejey paa way veera

Tere Bajon mere Suuney din tey Suuniyan raatan
Too kadey mere des phaira paa way veera

Maan di Akhan da taara Babul noo too ddadda piyara
Meri tey toon jind jaan way veera

Neendran Meriyan uud puud giyan
Mainoo ainaa yaad na aa way veera

Awaaz teri noo taras giyan wan
Mainoo VEER keh k bulaa way veera

Rondiyan akhan teriyan tuken raawahan
Adhi raati too sufnaa bun k aa way veera

[T@nh@ Mus@fir]

Re: Tanha Musafar ki shairi

jub tuq aap log meri pehli poetry ki tareefain nahi karain ge

uss time tuq koi new poetry share nahi karon ga. hunh

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Tanha Musafar ki shairi

Bahot khoob janab nice poetry
Naraz kion ho rahen hain chalen kar di taareef
ab aur bhi post karen poetry

[T@nh@ Mus@fir]

Re: Tanha Musafar ki shairi

wah ji wah bhai aap kitney taiz ho

thori si tareef ki hai pehley oron ko bhi tu karney dein na