Aankhoon Main

[Ali jee]

[uzair143]

Re: Aankhoon Main

ali bahi
bout hi zaberdast kia baat hai
Uzair

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Aankhoon Main

bAhoot khoob Ali
nice poetry aur design bhi achha kiya hai

[asif shahzad]

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buhat umdha janab...............

[Wafa]

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Bohot he achi nazam likhe hai Ali......desgining bhi bohot khoob..........:phool:

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

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Beautiful :phool:Kalam aur aapka kaam ............:thmbup:

bas imla ki aik do mistakes hain

4th line mein word Bay Qarar
aur 5th line mein tehzeeb

yun likha jaey ga

[khananiz]

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buhat hi umdah Ali bhai..........:)

[sweet ramsha]

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wah Ali bhai wah Aankhoon ki Atni khoob surat tarif app nai ki hey ... jawab nahi ...
bohat sare dad wasool karo app mare Tarf sey

:lpop:

[Ali jee]

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ali bahi
bout hi zaberdast kia baat hai
Uzair

thank u uziar bhai ................:lpop:

[jia]

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very nice sharing:)
bohat he acha likha hay
keep it up
b happy:rose

[Ali jee]

Re: Aankhoon Main

wah Ali bhai wah Aankhoon ki Atni khoob surat tarif app nai ki hey ... jawab nahi ...


bohat sare dad wasool karo app mare Tarf sey

:lpop:

thank u ................:lpop:

[Ali jee]

Re: Aankhoon Main

very nice sharing:)
bohat he acha likha hay
keep it up
b happy:rose

thank u ................:lpop:

[Ali jee]

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buhat hi umdah Ali bhai..........:)

thank u ................:lpop:

[Ali jee]

Re: Aankhoon Main

Beautiful :phool:Kalam aur aapka kaam ............:thmbup:

bas imla ki aik do mistakes hain

4th line mein word Bay Qarar
aur 5th line mein tehzeeb

yun likha jaey ga

thanx ............so much ....................

[Pretty_doll]

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wah Ali jee wah good one