~..iNtEzAaR..~

[Aabehayat]

AsSaLaM aLaiKum...
aPni AiK AdnA si nAZaM k sAaTh hAziR hOn..

~..iNtEzAaR..~

Intezaar kar lena'

kehna tua aasa'n hota hai

intezaar karna par

bauhat katthin hota hai

aik jaga par munjamid

paao'n shul ho jatay hain

palko'n pay sajay sabhi sapnay

pal main toot jatay hain

aankhein veeran hojati hain

saansay'n bejaan hojati hain

har haseen manzar

dhuwan dhuwan sa lagta hai

apna saya bhi kabhi

ajnabi sa lagta hai

phir kabhi kisi par

aitbaar nahi rehta

phir kabhi kisi ka bhi

intezaar nahi rehta

umeed totti hai tau

dil bhi toot jata hai

intezaar karna par

bauhat katthin hota hai

***************************************

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: ~..iNtEzAaR..~

waah aap poet bhi hain.........

har haseen manzar
dhuwan dhuwan sa lagta hai
apna saya bhi kabhi
ajnabi sa lagta hai
phir kabhi kisi par
aitbaar nahi rehta

janab bahoot khoobsurat nazam likhi hai aap ne
likhti rahen share karti rahen

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: ~..iNtEzAaR..~

acha copy paste kia hay.........
yeh kiun likh raha hun kiun k samaj hee gai hungi..
yeh ap kee likhani nahi hay
aur ager hay to pher aap thak gai hain
jaisa k main ny kaha tha...
waisy poetry good hay

[asif shahzad]

Re: ~..iNtEzAaR..~

wha kia batt hi buhat umdha

[Aabehayat]

Re: ~..iNtEzAaR..~

waah aap poet bhi hain.........

har haseen manzar
dhuwan dhuwan sa lagta hai
apna saya bhi kabhi
ajnabi sa lagta hai
phir kabhi kisi par
aitbaar nahi rehta

janab bahoot khoobsurat nazam likhi hai aap ne
likhti rahen share karti rahen

jeE bUS tUk bAndi kAr LeTi hOn... :khi:
pAsanD kArnAy kA shukriYA...

[Aabehayat]

Re: ~..iNtEzAaR..~

acha copy paste kia hay.........
yeh kiun likh raha hun kiun k samaj hee gai hungi..
yeh ap kee likhani nahi hay
aur ager hay to pher aap thak gai hain
jaisa k main ny kaha tha...
waisy poetry good hay

PoeTrY aGar mAiN aPnay anDaZ se LiKhON tAu hO skT AhAi suB kO pArhNAy mAin mUsHkiL hO..LehazA mAiNe aEsA LiKhA...
tHaKnay ki baAt nAHi hAi..sHuro sE mAiN aEse LikH rAHi hOn...
ThAnKX ..:)

[Aabehayat]

Re: ~..iNtEzAaR..~

wha kia batt hi buhat umdha

:salam: shUKRiYa BoHaT bOhAt...iSaY uMdA kEhNAy kA...:khi:

[shummu]

Re: ~..iNtEzAaR..~

bahut khoob.....

[MeemSheenAlif]

Re: ~..iNtEzAaR..~

wow nice buhat khubb

[Aabehayat]

Re: ~..iNtEzAaR..~

bahut khoob.....

sHukRiYA....

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: ~..iNtEzAaR..~

PoeTrY aGar mAiN aPnay anDaZ se LiKhON tAu hO skT AhAi suB kO pArhNAy mAin mUsHkiL hO..LehazA mAiNe aEsA LiKhA...
tHaKnay ki baAt nAHi hAi..sHuro sE mAiN aEse LikH rAHi hOn...
ThAnKX ..:)

any way aap baat kee paaki nahi hay pher too

[Aabehayat]

Re: ~..iNtEzAaR..~

wow nice buhat khubb

jEe sHukRiYa AaP kO pAsAnD AaYi..