Hamari Tasweer Aap Ka Kalaam: TAJ MAHAL

[Masood]

Assalamo allaikum

hamari tasweer aap ka kalaam ka doosra marhala hazir hai, aap sey guzarish ki jati hai keh is mein bhar'poor hissah lijiye...

October key maheeney ki jo tasweer chuni gaee hai woh iskey muhabbat ki sab sey badi nishani hai. Sahir Ludhiyanvi ney aik alag soch mein issey socha aur kaha:

Kisi shehanshah ney dolat ka sahara ley ker
ham ghareebon ki muhabbat ka urraya hai mazzaq

Ab aap key takhayyul ki bari hai... Don't hesitate :)

[sheem]

Re: Hamari Tasweer Aap Ka Kalaam: TAJ MAHAL

hmm very nice bhai

inshallah zaroor hisa longi salam:

[hayaa_n]

Re: Hamari Tasweer Aap Ka Kalaam: TAJ MAHAL

Mai'n bhi likhnay ki koshish karu'n gi.shayed kuch likh paau'n:)

[Hassan]

Re: Hamari Tasweer Aap Ka Kalaam: TAJ MAHAL

daykhoo aik i nsan ka pyar taj mahal
mohbbat ka hay s hahkar tajmahal
sabhi date mnany atay hain ab yaha
unhy daykh kr rota hay zar-o-qtar tajmahal
ay Hassan kitna maza aata hamain bhi
agr hota Pakistan main bhi tayar tajmahal
:embarasse
Sahil ki khamoshi

['SamRazi']

Re: Hamari Tasweer Aap Ka Kalaam: TAJ MAHAL

daykhoo aik i nsan ka pyar taj mahal
mohbbat ka hay s hahkar tajmahal
sabhi date mnany atay hain ab yaha
unhy daykh kr rota hay zar-o-qtar tajmahal
ay Hassan kitna maza aata hamain bhi
agr hota Pakistan main bhi tayar tajmahal
:embarasse
Sahil ki khamoshi

Buhut khoob Hassan :thmbup:

['SamRazi']

Re: Hamari Tasweer Aap Ka Kalaam: TAJ MAHAL

Me koshish kero gi :insha: ek choti si :p

[hayaa_n]

Re: Hamari Tasweer Aap Ka Kalaam: TAJ MAHAL

:roseTaaj Mahal:rose
Khud aik ghazal...
Ishq-e-Shah Jaha'n
Jis ka tu hay nisha'n...
Sang-e-mar'mar may chupee
Ulfat ki har ik chabee...
Karti hay sab say baya'n
Ishq ki woh daasta'n...
Sang-e-mar'mar kay tlay
Hain khoon kay dhabbay chupay...
Tairi sajaawat ka silah
Tairi banaawat ka silah
Dast-e-hunar katt kay mila...
Tujh may chupa asraar hay
Taira jo yeh andaaz hay
Woh bas taira hi raaz hay...
Ishq.o.mohabbat kay parwanay
Hain bas tairay deewanay...
Tairi mohabbat may sarshaar
Matwaalay deewana waar
Kartay hain taira deedar...
Daitay hain tujh ko salaam
Kartay hain tujh say kalaam...
:rose Taaj Mahal:rose
Itna to bata
Tujh may zinda hay mohabbat
Ya bana hay Maqbara...
:rose Taaj Mahal:rose
Tu baaqi rahay
Ishq.o.mohabbat jaari rahay...
:rose Taaj Mahal:rose
Khud aik ghazal...
(Háya)

[Hassan]

Re: Hamari Tasweer Aap Ka Kalaam: TAJ MAHAL

wah kitny payary ilfaz they ky dil khud be khud agey prhny pr majboor hogaya.
Taj Mehal ..Khud Aik Ghazal.
From
Hassan

[hayaa_n]

Re: Hamari Tasweer Aap Ka Kalaam: TAJ MAHAL

daykhoo aik i nsan ka pyar taj mahal
mohbbat ka hay s hahkar tajmahal
sabhi date mnany atay hain ab yaha
unhy daykh kr rota hay zar-o-qtar tajmahal
ay Hassan kitna maza aata hamain bhi
agr hota Pakistan main bhi tayar tajmahal
:embarasse
Sahil ki khamoshi

Hassan ji,,Aap nay mukhtasir magar umda likha hay.Bouhat khoob.Khush Rahiye:)

[hayaa_n]

Re: Hamari Tasweer Aap Ka Kalaam: TAJ MAHAL

wah kitny payary ilfaz they ky dil khud be khud agey prhny pr majboor hogaya.
Taj Mehal ..Khud Aik Ghazal.
From
Hassan

Hassan ji aap ki is pazeeraai k liye bouhat shukriya.Khush rahiye sada.:)

[Hassan]

Re: Hamari Tasweer Aap Ka Kalaam: TAJ MAHAL

Hayya ji aap ki is hosla afzai ki bohat bohat shukrya.or next timr itna lkhoo ga kay aap ko odhora chorna pry ga.
.
kitny hi log tafreh kay dhokkay main dob gaey HASSAN
sahil bhi khamosh hay or lehroo ka shour bhi macha naihn
(next Time) InshAAllah
HASSAN

[hayaa_n]

Re: Hamari Tasweer Aap Ka Kalaam: TAJ MAHAL

Hayya ji aap ki is hosla afzai ki bohat bohat shukrya.or next timr itna lkhoo ga kay aap ko odhora chorna pry ga.
.
kitny hi log tafreh kay dhokkay main dob gaey HASSAN
sahil bhi khamosh hay or lehroo ka shour bhi macha naihn
(next Time) InshAAllah
HASSAN

Hassan ji mairi koshish hoti hay k koi kaam adhoora na choru'n..Insha Allah aap ka likha huwa poora read karu'n gi chahay aankhon kay aagay sitaaray ya andhaira hi kiyu'n na aa ja'aiy.:)

[Hassan]

Re: Hamari Tasweer Aap Ka Kalaam: TAJ MAHAL

jii haya ji aapka mara likha hova read krny ka bohat shukrya........or Allah kry apki ye koshish pori ho ky koi bhi odhora kam na chorry....or main bhi koshish kroo gay kay apny klaam may raat ka or sehra ka bohat km ziker kroo..takay aapki ankhoo kay samny sitay or andehryaa na aey
Hassan

[hayaa_n]

Re: Hamari Tasweer Aap Ka Kalaam: TAJ MAHAL

Hassan ji thanx for yr reply.aap ki tehreer ka wait hay.Khush rahiye.:)

[Hassan]

Re: Hamari Tasweer Aap Ka Kalaam: TAJ MAHAL

anchal jee mohbbat agr baqi hy tu is main rony wali konsi bat hay??????