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-=Suno Jana Aisa Nahi Kerte=-
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Koi Kash Dil Pe Zara Haath Rakh De
Mere Dil K Tukro Ko Ik Saath Rakh De
Magar Ye Hain Khawabo Khayalo Ki Baatein
Kabhi Toot Ker Cheez Koi Jori Hai?
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Re: -=Suno Jana Aisa Nahi Kerte=-
Bahoot khoob Rabi bahoot khoobsurat gazal likhi hai aap ne
Aakhri line mein.......mujhe imla ki kuch galti lag rahi hai
bhoolnay ka youn bahana nahi karte..............aap ne bhana likha haiLast edited by WASI ANJUM; 28 March 2008, 14:05.sigpic
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Re: -=Suno Jana Aisa Nahi Kerte=-
bahana hai
lakin ghalat likh diya
pasand kerne ka bohat shukriyaKoi Kash Dil Pe Zara Haath Rakh De
Mere Dil K Tukro Ko Ik Saath Rakh De
Magar Ye Hain Khawabo Khayalo Ki Baatein
Kabhi Toot Ker Cheez Koi Jori Hai?
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ur welcome:)sigpic
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nicePal Pal taraste hain is pal k liyeye pal bhi aaya to ik pal k liyesocha tha isay zindagi ka ik haseen pal banaingeper ye pal ruka bhi to ik pal k liyeComment
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Boaht acha likha ha
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ap dono ka bohat shukriyaKoi Kash Dil Pe Zara Haath Rakh De
Mere Dil K Tukro Ko Ik Saath Rakh De
Magar Ye Hain Khawabo Khayalo Ki Baatein
Kabhi Toot Ker Cheez Koi Jori Hai?
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bout zaberdast rabi
bout hi peyara likha hai
Uzair
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Zaberdast
bohat achi poem likhi hai aap nay
:)Comment
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ap sab ka bohat thankxKoi Kash Dil Pe Zara Haath Rakh De
Mere Dil K Tukro Ko Ik Saath Rakh De
Magar Ye Hain Khawabo Khayalo Ki Baatein
Kabhi Toot Ker Cheez Koi Jori Hai?
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niCe oNe.....sigpicComment
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buhat khub
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good one:welcome:
I Have Green Blood In My Veins Because I Am a Pakistani
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