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  • -= Manzil =-

    Kis nooN haal sunawaN dil daa ....Koi mehram raaz nai mildaaa!
    Sadly, common sense is not very common..!!

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    Re: -= Manzil =-

    bahoot khoob janab nice poetry
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    • #3
      Re: -= Manzil =-

      Originally posted by WASI ANJUM View Post
      bahoot khoob janab nice poetry
      bohat shukaria bhai , agar koi ghalti lagay apko kahain tu mashwra dia karain please , so i can make it better , thanks.
      coz humain tu qafia aur radeef ki pehchaan nahi rahti :)
      Kis nooN haal sunawaN dil daa ....Koi mehram raaz nai mildaaa!
      Sadly, common sense is not very common..!!

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      • #4
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        Yaar qafiye aap ne nahi milaye hain Baqi Radeef sahi hai
        jaisay aap ne likha hai

        Manzil ganwa betha..to isi tarah aap ko qafiye mila kar likhna tha
        dil ganwa betha
        saahil ganwa betha isi tarah qafiye aaps mein milnay chahiyen
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        • #5
          Re: -= Manzil =-

          Originally posted by WASI ANJUM View Post
          Yaar qafiye aap ne nahi milaye hain Baqi Radeef sahi hai
          jaisay aap ne likha hai

          Manzil ganwa betha..to isi tarah aap ko qafiye mila kar likhna tha
          dil ganwa betha
          saahil ganwa betha isi tarah qafiye aaps mein milnay chahiyen
          Haan sahi kaha apne
          darasal yahan per loog ankhein bandh kar kay tareef kartay hain zayada tar :P
          mein sahi wali upload kar doon ga ab inshAllah :d
          thanks for that.
          Kis nooN haal sunawaN dil daa ....Koi mehram raaz nai mildaaa!
          Sadly, common sense is not very common..!!

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          • #6
            Re: -= Manzil =-

            Ur welcome janab
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            • #7
              Re: -= Manzil =-

              Buhat Khooob ....
              Zindagi Thak Gaye ..!!

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              • #8
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                Originally posted by GumShuda View Post
                Haan sahi kaha apne
                darasal yahan per loog ankhein bandh kar kay tareef kartay hain zayada tar :P
                mein sahi wali upload kar doon ga ab inshAllah :d
                thanks for that.
                Log is liye tareef karte hain k agar woh tanqeed karte hain to bura lagta hai
                aur likhnay wala bhi dil bardashta ho jata hai :)
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                • #9
                  Re: -= Manzil =-

                  miaaan kia baat ha ...khush raho :rose

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                  • #10
                    Re: -= Manzil =-

                    aap se darkhawst hai keh yeh thread dekhiye

                    http://www.pegham.com/showthread.php?t=27747

                    wasalam
                    zmufti

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