~Ik Din....~

[Shakh-e-Tamana]

[Hashim Raza]

Re: ~Ik Din....~

zabardast
bohot umdah shakh-e-tamana
.. kuchh bhi na kaha aur kehh bhi gaey ..
khush rahin sada aap

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: ~Ik Din....~

bahoot khoobsurat likha hai aap ne lafz nahi mil rahe k kiya likhon?
apni taqdeer kisi k naam nahi karni chahiye kiyon k us k saath gam
bhi shamil hotay hain kisi k naam karni hain to khushiyan ki jain

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: ~Ik Din....~

very nice g

[Shakh-e-Tamana]

Re: ~Ik Din....~

zabardast
bohot umdah shakh-e-tamana
.. kuchh bhi na kaha aur kehh bhi gaey ..
khush rahin sada aap

thanks so much ji:rose

[Shakh-e-Tamana]

Re: ~Ik Din....~

bahoot khoobsurat likha hai aap ne lafz nahi mil rahe k kiya likhon?
apni taqdeer kisi k naam nahi karni chahiye kiyon k us k saath gam
bhi shamil hotay hain kisi k naam karni hain to khushiyan ki jain

taqdeer aisi liye naam ki keh us ko b un dukhon ka ehsaas ho...bas


kher thanks so much..pasand kernay ka:rose

[Shakh-e-Tamana]

Re: ~Ik Din....~

very nice g

thanks..:rose

[Capt.Abdur Rehman]

Re: ~Ik Din....~

very nice Tamana jee ..khush rahiyay :rose

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Ik Din....~

wah bohat he khubsurat . bohat si daad qubol kijiye :ff:
khush rahiye

[khananiz]

Re: ~Ik Din....~

buhat hi khoobsurat likha hai aap ne...........:thmbup:
buhat hi zabardast Shakh-e-Tamana...........

[raafi]

Re: ~Ik Din....~

i can actually feel this alot basically well written most def......

[uzair143]

Re: ~Ik Din....~

zaberdast
bout khoobsurat
jari rekhe
thanks
Uzair

[Shakh-e-Tamana]

Re: ~Ik Din....~

ap teeno ka buhat buhat shukriya...

[vajiha]

Re: ~Ik Din....~

bohat hi umda bohat khubsurat likha he tamanna ji rose

[Shakh-e-Tamana]

Re: ~Ik Din....~

thanks so much wareesha...:phool: