Wo Kehta Hai....

[Shakh-e-Tamana]

salam frnds

kaisay hain sab?


1st time apni poetry main say kuch pg per share ker rahi hoon....bataiye ga kaisi lagi....baki b jeld he share karon gi InshaAllah

[raafi]

Re: Wo Kehta Hai....

I'm at such a loss for words to tell u how much i liked this poetry of urs.
i wrote this poetry of urs in my diary to keep it permanently with me...... nice shairng

[Capt.Abdur Rehman]

Re: Wo Kehta Hai....

very nice sharing shaakh..:rose

keep sharing and be happy..

[Shakh-e-Tamana]

Re: Wo Kehta Hai....

thanks so much Raafi n Sher.....

be happy :phool:

[La'hasil]

Re: Wo Kehta Hai....

Buhat Khoobsurat


Aur Umeed Karti hoon Aur bhi Buhat khuch Tumhara Likha Parhney ko Miley Ga :rose

[Masood]

Re: Wo Kehta Hai....

main jo kehta hoon keh tum achha likhti ho
woh kehti hai
masood ji bohat shukriyah
main jo kehta hoon
tumhari soch ney ik kaifiyat bandh di hai
woh kehti hai
Masood ji hosla afzaii hai
main kehta hoon
tum likhti raha karo
woh kehti hai
Masood ji pen mein ink nahin hai :kr:
main kehta hoon
Pencil ley lo
woh kehti hai
Masood ji bazaar jana parrey ga
main kehta hoon
main email kar doon? :khi:
woh kehti hai
Dakiya daak dena bhool jaey ga


Waah Tamana bohat achha likha hai, magar yeh aakhri line mein kuchh garr barr si lag rahi hai? "chand sey KISI KEH itni muhabbat jo nahin" .....

[Z.]

Re: Wo Kehta Hai....

wahh! tamanna v well written ... keep them coming

[La'hasil]

Re: Wo Kehta Hai....

main jo kehta hoon keh tum achha likhti ho
woh kehti hai
masood ji bohat shukriyah
main jo kehta hoon
tumhari soch ney ik kaifiyat bandh di hai
woh kehti hai
Masood ji hosla afzaii hai
main kehta hoon
tum likhti raha karo
woh kehti hai
Masood ji pen mein ink nahin hai :kr:
main kehta hoon
Pencil ley lo
woh kehti hai
Masood ji bazaar jana parrey ga
main kehta hoon
main email kar doon? :khi:
woh kehti hai
Dakiya daal dena bhool jaey ga


Waah Tamana bohat achha likha hai, magar yeh aakhri line mein kuchh garr barr si lag rahi hai? "chand sey KISI KEH itni muhabbat jo nahin" .....

LoLZZZZZZZ

[Shakh-e-Tamana]

Re: Wo Kehta Hai....

main jo kehta hoon keh tum achha likhti ho
woh kehti hai
masood ji bohat shukriyah
main jo kehta hoon
tumhari soch ney ik kaifiyat bandh di hai
woh kehti hai
Masood ji hosla afzaii hai
main kehta hoon
tum likhti raha karo
woh kehti hai
Masood ji pen mein ink nahin hai :kr:
main kehta hoon
Pencil ley lo
woh kehti hai
Masood ji bazaar jana parrey ga
main kehta hoon
main email kar doon? :khi:
woh kehti hai
Dakiya daak dena bhool jaey ga


Waah Tamana bohat achha likha hai, magar yeh aakhri line mein kuchh garr barr si lag rahi hai? "chand sey KISI KEH itni muhabbat jo nahin" .....

haye haye yeh me ki poem ka kaya bana diya ap nay Masood ji :kr::kr:


waisay me nay ap ko Masood ji kab kaha tha:kr::kr::kr::kr:..ap tu Admin uncle na..;)



Thanks sooooo much:phool:


or na yeh inpage per lhiknay walay ki mistake hai.....Keh ki Bajye Ko Hai...mean Kis Ko

[Shakh-e-Tamana]

Re: Wo Kehta Hai....

Buhat Khoobsurat


Aur Umeed Karti hoon Aur bhi Buhat khuch Tumhara Likha Parhney ko Miley Ga :rose

thanks La hasil ji:phool:


InshaAllah ahista ahsita sab share karon gi :eye:

[Shakh-e-Tamana]

Re: Wo Kehta Hai....

wahh! tamanna v well written ... keep them coming

Thanks so much ji:phool:

[GumShuda]

Re: Wo Kehta Hai....

nice , keep sharing

[Shakh-e-Tamana]

Re: Wo Kehta Hai....

thanks v much ji

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Wo Kehta Hai....

Very Nice Buhat Acha Laga Ap Kee Apni Poetry Dekh Ker

Chaloo....
Pegham Per Aik Aur Bongy Poet Ka Ezafa Hogia
Lolzz

[Shakh-e-Tamana]

Re: Wo Kehta Hai....

na pata cha tareef ki na pata chala tanz kiya


kher Thanks..jo b kiya..:P