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salam alikum
dosto.. ap ki bazm main hazir hon
aik ghazal paish-e-khidmatt hai
dua go
hashim
dosto.. ap ki bazm main hazir hon
aik ghazal paish-e-khidmatt hai
dua go
hashim
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Re: Falak Sajan Ko Rangon Ki Doriyan Niklin
Buhat Umdaah
Share Kartay Rahiye :roseZindagi Thak Gaye ..!!
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Re: Falak Sajan Ko Rangon Ki Doriyan Niklin
hashim bhai bahut khoob aur umda likha hai
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Re: Falak Sajan Ko Rangon Ki Doriyan Niklin
waah waah janab
bahoot he zabardast gazal hai....daad qbool ho
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bohot shukriyya La'hasilOriginally posted by La'hasil View Post
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bohot shukriyya raafi sahabOriginally posted by raafi View Post
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Re: Falak Sajan Ko Rangon Ki Doriyan Niklin
bohot shukriyya wasi sahabOriginally posted by WASI ANJUM View Post
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Re: Falak Sajan Ko Rangon Ki Doriyan Niklin
bohat acha likha hai mashAllah apne Hashim bhai
3rd shair mein agar hoos ki jagah Bhook likh dia jai tu kaisa rahay ga ? samandar kay parinday bhook se martay hain :$
barhaal bohat achi koshish hai keep sharing.Kis nooN haal sunawaN dil daa ....Koi mehram raaz nai mildaaa!
Sadly, common sense is not very common..!!Comment
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Re: Falak Sajan Ko Rangon Ki Doriyan Niklin
salam alikumOriginally posted by GumShuda View Post
ghazal ko pasand karnay ka bohot shukriyya
asal main zahiran to har janwar bhok ka hi nishana banata hai dosray janwar ko.. lekin iss sher main kissi aur taraf ishara hai... aur hawass kay maaray parinday aur machhlian.. aik kahawat bhi hai....
bohot shukriyya aap ka
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Re: Falak Sajan Ko Rangon Ki Doriyan Niklin
apki baat theek ho gi, lekin mera khayal hai hawas na khatam honay wali cheez hoti hai. aur jo pariday Machliyaa'N khatay hain jab unka pait bhar jata hai tu wo chalay jatay hain :). barhaal phir wohi kahon ga ap behtar jantay ho :dOriginally posted by Hashim Raza View PostKis nooN haal sunawaN dil daa ....Koi mehram raaz nai mildaaa!
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Re: Falak Sajan Ko Rangon Ki Doriyan Niklin
yeh to sahi kaha aap nay kay hawas na khatam honay wali cheez hai lekin gzarish hai kay iss sher kay zahiri ma'ani dekhnay ki bajaey inn lafzon kay peechay kay mafhoom ko bhi dekhain to ap ko iss lafz "hawas" ka matlab wazih ho jaey ga... aur aik baat yeh bhi hai kay agar lafz bhook ko use kia jaey to sher wazan sahi bhi kharij ho jaey ga...Originally posted by GumShuda View Post
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Re: Falak Sajan Ko Rangon Ki Doriyan Niklin
wah bohat hi khoob - har sher be misaal - aala hay - daad wasool kejyeAllah
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Re: Falak Sajan Ko Rangon Ki Doriyan Niklin
bohot shukriyya yaaram sahabOriginally posted by Yaaram View Post
hosla afzai ka shukriyya
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