~kanch ki guriya~

[Pehli``Barish]

[Z.]

Re: ~kanch ki guriya~

MashAllah well written :rose

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~kanch ki guriya~

bohat shukriya sweeto :ff:

[Wafa]

Re: ~kanch ki guriya~

wow bohot he khoobsurat likha hai.....very touchy.......aur designing is also superb.........:phool:

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~kanch ki guriya~

bohat shukriya sis :ff:

[raafi]

Re: ~kanch ki guriya~

aap wakai umda aur jandaar likhti hain..... mein aap ka poetry ka fan hoon......

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~kanch ki guriya~

bohat shurkira raafi :ff:
lakin aap ne to meri ye 2nd nazm he parhi hai
kisi our k to fan nahi?

[GumShuda]

Re: ~kanch ki guriya~

bohat umda likha hai mashAllah.

[raafi]

Re: ~kanch ki guriya~

bohat shurkira raafi :ff:
lakin aap ne to meri ye 2nd nazm he parhi hai
kisi our k to fan nahi?

nasri adab mein pehli baarish ko bhi parha vo bhi aap nay bahut umda aur khoob likha tha.......

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~kanch ki guriya~

bohat umda likha hai mashAllah.

bohat shukriya janab :ff:

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~kanch ki guriya~

nasri adab mein pehli baarish ko bhi parha vo bhi aap nay bahut umda aur khoob likha tha.......

acha sahe
vesy meri tehreer main barish hon meri adhori nazam he thi
jo kabhi pori na ho saki to isko nasar he main convert kar dia

[GumShuda]

Re: ~kanch ki guriya~

bohat shukriya janab :ff:

u r welcome .

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: ~kanch ki guriya~

Bahoot khoobsurat nazam hai
aur designing bhi khoobsurat hai

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~kanch ki guriya~

u r welcome .

rose :rose

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~kanch ki guriya~

Bahoot khoobsurat nazam hai
aur designing bhi khoobsurat hai

bohat shukriya janab :ff: