Aek Ghazal

[zain]

dosto aap se aek nayi ghazal shar karne ja raha hoon,umeed hai ke aap bardaasht karain ge,tanqeedi o ta.ameeri aara ka intazaar rahe ga,
bahot khush rahiye,

[:Qassim:]

Re: Aek Ghazal

Salaam

Baraderam aapkii ghazal paRhii aur dubara paRhii, bohot lutf aaya ... Her ghazal meN aap khayaalaat kii puKhtagii ka muzahira ker rahay haiN ... Meri taraf se bohot saarii daad qubool keejiay :rose

YouNhii likhtay rahiay :phool:

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:

[zain]

Re: Aek Ghazal

Salaam

Baraderam aapkii ghazal paRhii aur dubara paRhii, bohot lutf aaya ... Her ghazal meN aap khayaalaat kii puKhtagii ka muzahira ker rahay haiN ... Meri taraf se bohot saarii daad qubool keejiay :rose

YouNhii likhtay rahiay :phool:

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:

bahot shukriya QASIM bhahi,aap naheen jaante aap ke yeh alfaaz mere liye kaya aehmiyat rakhte hain,umeed hai aap aainda bhi rahnumaai karte rahain ge.
bahot khush rahiye,

[Hassan]

Re: Aek Ghazal

Raat ye hijer ki guzrey gi kis bahaney sey
bohat achi ghazal likhi hay.......or likta rehna isi trh syyyyyyy.
prh kay bohat maza aya........
dobara kb aaa rehy ho?
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