Haya n ki ghazal URDU mein

[WOH LARKI]

Haya aap ki ijazat liye bagher hi aap ki ghazal ko urdu inpage mein likh ker bhej rhi hoon, ma'azrat qabool kijiye ga:rose aur ijazat dijiye ga k aap ka deeger kalaam bhi urdu mein post ker skti hoon k nhi? :)

Ham chiragho'n ki tarha rouz jala kartay hai'n
Phir bhi woh dil kay andhairo'n ka gila kartay hai'n
:rose
Marna aasa'n nazar aata hay hamai'n jeenay say
Jaanay kis tarha yaha'n loge jiyaa kartay hai'n
:rose
Ham banaatay hai'n khayalaat mai'n khushiyo'n kay maihal
Gham kay toofaa'n unhai'n kiyu'n tour diya kartay hai'n
:rose
Jab tairi yaad mai'n namm houti hain aankhai'n mairi
Baihtay dariya mairay ashko'n mai'n mila kartay hai'n
:rose

Jab bhi chaahai'n tujhay ham daikh liya kartay hai'n
:rose

[hayaa_n]

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Assalam.o.aleikum
Mushan ji naiki aur pooch pooch:)mujhay to computer ka ziyada kuch aata hi nahi'n hay bas likh laiti hu'n woh hi ghaneemat hay.
aap nay mairay liye itni maihnat ki aur time nikaala dil say shukar guzaar hu'n.
aap agar maira likha huwa urdu mai'n likh sakti hai'n to is say barh kay aur kiya gift mairay liye ho sakta hay kiyu'n kay mai'n roman urdu mai'n hi likh sakti hu'n.
aap ko bouhat kaam karna parey ga.
mai'n dil say shukar guzaar hu'n.aur aap maazrat kar rahi hai'n jab kay yeh to aap nay woh kaam kiya hay jo mai'n soch bhi nahi sakti thi.

Muskan ji urdu mai'n likhtay huway 2 misro'n mai'n lafz kuch idher say udher ho ga'aiy hain. kiya aap un'ko bhi theek kar sakti hai'n? mashkoor rahu'n gi.:)
urdu mai'n likhi tehreer ka apna hi aik andaaz houta hay jo aankho'n ko bhala lagta hay.
Main aap ka shukriya kis tarha adaa karu'n?:rose :rose :rose

[sheem]

Re: Haya n ki ghazal URDU mein

hmm very nice :x

[Masood]

Re: Haya n ki ghazal URDU mein

Main aap ka shukriya kis tarha adaa karu'n?

Haya tumhein kisi ka shukriyah ada karney ki zaroorat nahin aur yeh main muskan ki janib sey bhi kah rahah hoon. Kyun keh tum tumhari sochein, tumhari alfaaz bohat pyarey hain. Allah tumheiin hamesha achha likhney ki tofeeq ata farmaein aur bohat khush raho :) ta

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Haya n ki ghazal URDU mein

buhat khaoob

[hayaa_n]

Re: Haya n ki ghazal URDU mein

Assalam.o.aleikum
Sheem Ji
Khl Ji
ta ji:)

Itni ziyada pazeeraai kay liye Shee ji,Khl Ji bouhat mamnoon rahu'n gi.:)
ok ta ji mai'n Muskan ji ka shukriya adaa nahi'n karti aap hi un ko mairi taraf say kaih dijiye ga.aap jaisay umda writer n poet k yeh alfaaz maira howsla barha daitay hai'n k aap ki tehreerain to bouhat showq say parhi jaati hai'n.aap maira likha read kartay hain yeh hi aizaaz ki baat hay mairay liye.aur aap ki duao'n kay liye to mai'n kuch bhi kaih hi nahi sakoo'n gi.khush rahiye.

Urdu main likhtay huway 2 misro'n mai'n lafz zara idher say udher ho ga'aiy hai'n kiya woh bhi theek kiye ja saktay hai'n? agar Muskan ji ko mushkil paish na aa'aiy to woh theek kardai'n warna yu'n hi raihnay dijiye.:)

[Yaaram]

Re: Haya n ki ghazal URDU mein

Bohat umdah khayalat ki malik hain haya aap......humare bhatke hoe khayalat jab milte hian to sher ki takhleeq hoti hay.....aap ki soch ki parwaz bohat buland hay.:).....aur Muskan nice work :)

[WOH LARKI]

Re: Haya n ki ghazal URDU mein

Assalam.o.aleikum
Sheem Ji
Khl Ji
ta ji:)

Itni ziyada pazeeraai kay liye Shee ji,Khl Ji bouhat mamnoon rahu'n gi.:)
ok ta ji mai'n Muskan ji ka shukriya adaa nahi'n karti aap hi un ko mairi taraf say kaih dijiye ga.aap jaisay umda writer n poet k yeh alfaaz maira howsla barha daitay hai'n k aap ki tehreerain to bouhat showq say parhi jaati hai'n.aap maira likha read kartay hain yeh hi aizaaz ki baat hay mairay liye.aur aap ki duao'n kay liye to mai'n kuch bhi kaih hi nahi sakoo'n gi.khush rahiye.

Urdu main likhtay huway 2 misro'n mai'n lafz zara idher say udher ho ga'aiy hai'n kiya woh bhi theek kiye ja saktay hai'n? agar Muskan ji ko mushkil paish na aa'aiy to woh theek kardai'n warna yu'n hi raihnay dijiye.:)

Array HAYA JI aap really mein mujhey sharmindah ker rhi hein, shukriya ki bilkul bhi zarorat nhi hey. Aur inshallah yehan per aap ne jitna bhi klaam share kiya hey mein koshish keroon gi k wo Urdu meinker k aik hi thread mein ikatha kar doon, ta k parhnay walay kisi tehreer se mehroom nah reh jayein.
Aap mashaAllah boht acha likhti hein, Masood akser aap ka zikr krtay hein, mein bhi aap ki har tehreer ko shouq se perhti hoon.
Aur mein jo alfaz IDHER se ODHER ho gaye hein, unn ko dhoondh ker abhi apni jagah per wapas rakh deti hoon:), agar mujhey woh alfaz nhi milay to plz aap PM mein unhein bhej dijiye, mein taseeh ker doon gi.
Humesha khush rahiye, likhti rahiye aur humaray sath share kerti rahiye, aap ka likhna humaray liye bahes e mussarat hey.:)

[WOH LARKI]

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Haya Ji:rose , idher odher ho janay walay alfaz apnay asal thikanay per a gaye hein:). Wo pata kia kall zara ujlat mein thi iss liye alfaz idher odher khisek gaye aur mujhye pata hi nhi chala tha, InshaAllah aaindah dhyan rakhoon gi.

[hayaa_n]

Re: Haya n ki ghazal URDU mein

Bohat umdah khayalat ki malik hain haya aap......humare bhatke hoe khayalat jab milte hian to sher ki takhleeq hoti hay.....aap ki soch ki parwaz bohat buland hay.:).....aur Muskan nice work :)

Assalam.o.aleikum
aap sab ki itni tareef aur duao'n say paishaani arq'aalood ho gaai aur may nay again apna likha huwa read kiya but mujhay woh sab kuch nazar nahi'n aaya jis tarha k aap sab mairay likhay ko saraah'tay hai'n.
bouhat shukriya qubool kijiye mairi taraf say.khush rahiye:)

[hayaa_n]

Re: Haya n ki ghazal URDU mein

Assalam.o.Aleikum
Muskan ji:)
Aap nay itna sab kiya hay aur mazeed irada bhi rakhti hai'n is k liye mai'n waaqai aap ki bouhat shukar guzaar hu'n.mairi to abhi kam hi posts hai'n aur aap sab nay mujhay jo maan diya hay us kay liye may baad Khuda kay bouhat shukar guzaar hu'n kay aap sab bouhat nice hai'n aur qaabil-e-izzat bhi mairay liye kay mai'n to abhi har tarha bouhat hi Junior hu'n aur is sab ki mustahiq nahi'n thi jitna sab aap logo'n nay mujhay saraaha hay.kis tarha bhala shukriya adaa na karu'n?ji haa'n ghazal mai'n mai'n nay read kar liya hay k aap nay us ko sahi kar diya hay. yeh lijiye duao'n bhara:rose khush rahiye.:rose

[khurram_shaikh]

Re: Haya n ki ghazal URDU mein

Assalaam o alekum,



Muskaan aapnien bahoot achchaa kiyaa jo haya sahiba ki ghazloon ko inpage mien humaare saamnien pesh kernien kaa beera uthaayaa hai :) waise to main shuru se hi haya ji kalam perhtaa aayaa hun jabse yeh yehaan aayi hain aur jab jab inke kalam pernien kaa sharf huaa tab tab ek ehsaas huaa ke waaqaee yeh haya ji ke alfaz hain jo humaare diloon koo choo jaate hain kabhi yeh hunsaati hain to kabhi rulaa bhi deti hain :) jaise ab in ashaar ko dekhien kitnaa dard hai issmien

Ham chiragho'n ki tarha rouz jala kartay hai'n
Phir bhi woh dil kay andhairo'n ka gila kartay hai'n

Marna aasa'n nazar aata hay hamai'n jeenay say
Jaanay kis tarha yaha'n log jiyaa kartay hai'n
humaari janib se hala ji ko iss kavish ke likhnien aur huaamre saath share kernien kaa bahoot bahoot shukriyaa aayindaa bhi intezaar rahegaa khush rahien aap donoon

[hayaa_n]

Re: Haya n ki ghazal URDU mein

Assalam.o.Alaikum
Khurram shaikh ji yaqeen kijiye woh alfaaz nahi'n kay mai'n aap ka shukriya ada karu'n.
ta ji nay is forum ka mujhay kaha tha aur 1st day hi mujhay yeh forum bouhat acha laga tha but mai'n ziyaada aa'nahi'n paai aur sab say ziyaada afsos is baat ka hay k mai'n kisi ko read nahi'n kar paa rahi aur bas post likhtay hi DC karna hota hay jab kay yeh mairi na'insaafi hay k mai'n kisi ko reply nahi'n likh paa rahi.jab read hi nahi'n kar pati to reply bhala kis tarha likhu'n? is liye mujhay bouhat sharmindigi feel hoti hay aur acha feel nahi'n karti but mairi majboori hay k mujhay Dc karna hota hay.umeed hay k mairi maazrat qubool kar lai'n gay.Khush rahiye

[Yaaram]

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Assalam.o.aleikum
aap sab ki itni tareef aur duao'n say paishaani arq'aalood ho gaai aur may nay again apna likha huwa read kiya but mujhay woh sab kuch nazar nahi'n aaya jis tarha k aap sab mairay likhay ko saraah'tay hai'n.
bouhat shukriya qubool kijiye mairi taraf say.khush rahiye:)

jo kisi ke dil ki baat kahe .....asal shayer whai hota hay jee.....:) no thnx :)

[hayaa_n]

Re: Haya n ki ghazal URDU mein

Assalam.o.Alaikum

Yaaramm Ji aap kay umda reply ko read kar kay mujhay apna hi aik shair yaad aa'gaya.

Mai'n shaair nahi'n hu'n Khuda ki qasam
Yeh ashaar hai'n us kay bakhshay hu'aiy

Bouhat shukriya.Khush rahiye:)