Maira Bister,Mairi Chaadar,Aur Maira Takkiya

[hayaa_n]

Asslmaoalikum :rose

[Masood]

Re: Maira Bister,Mairi Chaadar,Aur Maira Takkiya

:rose

tum jab bhi likhti ho Haya bohat pyara likhti ho. Main to kab ka tumhari soch ka qaeel ho chuka hoon, lekin afsos hai to is baat ka keh is umer mein ya sab kuch??? Bohat janta hoon, bohat sochta hoon aur bohat bar qismat ko pukarta hoon kaisey masoom logon ko kya kuchh dikha diya hai. Haya har bar tumharey liye ta ki aik dua hoti hai: tumhein hazaron bars ki khushiyaan milein. Ameen :)

[zain]

Re: Maira Bister,Mairi Chaadar,Aur Maira Takkiya

Maira Bister,,,
Mairi Chaadar,,,
Aur maira Takkiya,,,
Mairay aansuo'n say bheeg kay
Banay hai'n chaahat kay gawaah,,,
Bistar ki silwato'n mai'n
Bay'chain karwato'n mai'n
Jo ratt'jagay chupay hai'n
Woh khud bhi ro'diye hai'n,,,
Jalti huwi yeh aankhai'n
namkeen paaniyo'n ko
Ab kis'tarha say rokai'n,,,
Seenay mai'n ghut'ti cheekai'n
Mujh say machal machal kay
Apna qusoor poochai'n,,,
''MAI'N KHUD BAY'DAST.O.PAA HU'N''
Cheekho'n ko kiya kahu'n mai'n
Namkeen paaniyo'n ki
Laihro'n say kiya kahu'n mai'n
Bistar ki silwato'n ko
Ab kaisay kiya kahu'n mai'n
Takkiye mai'n jazb houti
Khaamosh hichkiyo'n say
Ab kaisay kiya kahu'n mai'n,,,
Khaamosh hont mairay
Kitna yeh boltay hai'n
Dil ki har aik dharkan
Kitna pukaarti hay,,,
Her pall,her aik saa'at
Kitna jalaa rahi hay
Aur yeh jalan hi mujh ko
Sab kuch bata rahi hay
Sab kuch bata kay mujh ko
Kiya kuch chupa rahi hay
Jo kuch chupa rahi hay
Woh jaanta hay Bistar,,,
Woh jaanti hay Chaadar,,,
Woh jaanta hay Takkiya,,,

wow!!!!!!!
zabardast,bahot hi khoobsurat aor payaari nazam kahi hai aap ne,dheron daad qabool kijiye,
bahot khush rahiye.

[hayaa_n]

Re: Maira Bister,Mairi Chaadar,Aur Maira Takkiya

ASSALAM.O.ALEIKUM
Zain Ji aap k reply aur howsla afzaai ka bouhat shukriya.mai'n bouhat kam likh paati hu'n aur dil chahnay kay baa'wajood aap sab ko read nahi'n kar'paati aur na hi replies likh paati hu'n jis kay liye bouhat maazrat chahti hu'n mujhay fowran hi Dc karna houta hay is liye bas jaldi say koi post likh kay Dc kar daiti hu'n.
Khush rahiye.
Allah hafiz

[khurram_shaikh]

Re: Maira Bister,Mairi Chaadar,Aur Maira Takkiya

Assalaam o alekum,


waaah bahoot khoob bahoot umdeh haya aapke taqreeban sabhi kalam perhe naajaanien kaun si kashish hooti hai aapke kalam mien ke baar baar perhnien ko ji chaahata hai bari hi saadgi se bahoot bahoot kuch bayaan ker deti hain aap dili daad qabool karien khush rahien

[hayaa_n]

Re: Maira Bister,Mairi Chaadar,Aur Maira Takkiya

Assalam.o.aleikum
Khurram Shaikh ji aap ki itni tareef pay mai'n khush bhi hu'n aur baar baar read bhi apna likha huwa karti hu'n kay pata nahi'n kiya likh'ti hun? kaisa likhti hu'n? kiya itni Junior ho kay itni tareef ki mustahiq hu'n bhi kay nahi'n?dil say shukar guzaar hu'n in replies ki.Khush rahiye.

[samander]

Re: Maira Bister,Mairi Chaadar,Aur Maira Takkiya

:rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose
ITNI HASSEN CHEEZ HAI KAY BAS DIL KHUSH HO GAYA AUR KUCH UDAS BHI.....CHAIN BHI MILA BEQARARI BHI ......AJNABI
:rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose

[hayaa_n]

Re: Maira Bister,Mairi Chaadar,Aur Maira Takkiya

Samandar ji itnay saaray roses aur itna umda reply parh kay bouhat khushi hui.:jazak: Khush rahiye sada.:)

[samander]

Re: Maira Bister,Mairi Chaadar,Aur Maira Takkiya

:sword: :hug:

[hayaa_n]

Re: Maira Bister,Mairi Chaadar,Aur Maira Takkiya

Samandar ji Aik martaba phir aap ka shukriya adaa karti hu'n kay aap ko maira likha huwa itna pasand aaya.:) :jazak:

[Rabi]

Re: Maira Bister,Mairi Chaadar,Aur Maira Takkiya

oh dil hi udaas ho gaya:(itna accha likha dil may utrta mehsos hova

[hayaa_n]

Re: Maira Bister,Mairi Chaadar,Aur Maira Takkiya

oh dil hi udaas ho gaya:(itna accha likha dil may utrta mehsos hova

Rabi aap ko yeh nazm pasand aai mujhay bouhat khushi hui.bouhat shukriya. :)

[khan]

Re: Maira Bister,Mairi Chaadar,Aur Maira Takkiya

AOA,

Wah wah kia baat hai kia rawani hai muje nain andaza tha aap itna piyara likhte hain:masha dili daad qabool karain:)


Sohail Abbasi.

[hayaa_n]

Re: Maira Bister,Mairi Chaadar,Aur Maira Takkiya

W.salaam
:jazak: :) Khan ji itnay umda lafzon main mairi howsla afzaai ka bouhat shukriya...mujhay khushi hui k nazm aap ko pasand aai.:)

[rehman]

Re: Maira Bister,Mairi Chaadar,Aur Maira Takkiya

:rose

tum jab bhi likhti ho Haya bohat pyara likhti ho. Main to kab ka tumhari soch ka qaeel ho chuka hoon, lekin afsos hai to is baat ka keh is umer mein ya sab kuch??? Bohat janta hoon, bohat sochta hoon aur bohat bar qismat ko pukarta hoon kaisey masoom logon ko kya kuchh dikha diya hai. Haya har bar tumharey liye ta ki aik dua hoti hai: tumhein hazaron bars ki khushiyaan milein. Ameen :)

rehman sahab is taraha kay replies say parheez kejeye :rose