tarahi ghazal

[zain]

salaam dosto,
aek forum pe aek tarahi mushaire ke liye aek ghazal kahi thi,socha aap se shar ki jaaye,
aap doston ki qeemati tanqeedi magar ta.ameeri aara ka intazaar rahe ga,
bahot khush rahiye,

[Aania]

Re: tarahi ghazal

Phool bhi chuye to khanjar ho jaaye....hmmmm superb piece of poetry.... :phool: roserose likhtey rahye share kertey rahey......be happy always.....its really very very nice

[WOH LARKI]

Re: tarahi ghazal

Sari ki sari ghazal boht khoob.

ki muhabbat to mila hum ko sila
khwab jo bhi thay,wo pather ho gaye

khush rahiye, likhtay rahiye aur humaray sath share kertay rahiye:rose

[zain]

Re: tarahi ghazal

Phool bhi chuye to khanjar ho jaaye....hmmmm superb piece of poetry.... :phool: roserose likhtey rahye share kertey rahey......be happy always.....its really very very nice

bahot bahot shukriya aania ghazal pasand karne aor sarahne ka,
bahot khush rahiye.

[zain]

Re: tarahi ghazal

Sari ki sari ghazal boht khoob.

ki muhabbat to mila hum ko sila
khwab jo bhi thay,wo pather ho gaye

khush rahiye, likhtay rahiye aur humaray sath share kertay rahiye:rose

bahot shukriya muskan is hosala afzai ke liye,insha allah koshish karoon ga k likhta aor shar karta rahoon,
bahot khush rahiye.

[Hassan]

Re: tarahi ghazal

very nice