Muhammad Baqar's Poetry.

[baqarkashmiri]

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I am starting to write for the pegham.

Its my poetry.

Ghurbat mein mili be khata saza hamin lekin.
woh jo kasoor war ha jaho jalal mein
hum apni he wafwaon se behla rahy thay dil
phir cheer diya us ne ameeri ka fasana.

Zaroor batayee ga kesa laga.:dua

[A.h.khan]

Re: Muhammad Baqar's Poetry.

nice
achi koshis hae
likhte rhye agey chal ke ap aek ache sahir ban sakte hai hain

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Muhammad Baqar's Poetry.

achhi koshish hai magar kuch kami si lagi qafiye aaps mein nahi mil rahe
waisay wording aur khayal achha hai
likhtay raheN

[baqarkashmiri]

Re: Muhammad Baqar's Poetry.

nice
achi koshis hae
likhte rhye agey chal ke ap aek ache sahir ban sakte hai hain

Thanks

[baqarkashmiri]

Re: Muhammad Baqar's Poetry.

achhi koshish hai magar kuch kami si lagi qafiye aaps mein nahi mil rahe
waisay wording aur khayal achha hai
likhtay raheN

Thanks

next bhi jald he milay ge.
ummeed ha woh theek ho jaye ge'

[baqarkashmiri]

Re: Muhammad Baqar's Poetry.

KAASH AESA HO JAYEE!!!!!

Meray Labob par bas yeh dua ha k
mere yad tere rag-e-jan mein sama jaye
aur tu mere pass is tarha se lot aye k
wapsi ka har rasta har nishan kho jaye
magar tu meray dil mein apnay liye na kuch paye
Kassh Aesa Ho jaye Kaash aesa ho jaye.

[A.h.khan]

Re: Muhammad Baqar's Poetry.

nice bahot ache baqar ji

[baqarkashmiri]

Re: Muhammad Baqar's Poetry.

nice bahot ache baqar ji

Thanks